First here is our favourite place our beautifui garden many trees and many flowers in it. then you can go into it .Now,you know why we love it right .we can write red and chat in it.(tell you a secret:I like it because it is cool in summer and warm in winter.
Now,I will tell you more about my friends &teachers. Over here teachers are friendly to us,so we never say a bad word about them.Because of these,students can get good grades at my school.(Would you like to come?)
I think my school is one of the best schools in the world.Because we have good teachers good students and everything is beautiful. I like it, every at it likes it.
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首先这是我们最喜欢的地方，我们美丽的花园，许多许多树木和花草吧。你可以知道为什么我们喜欢它，我们可以写红色和聊天它(告诉你一个秘密：我喜欢它，因为它是凉爽的夏天和温暖的冬天。
现在，我会告诉你更多关于我的朋友和老师。在这里老师对我们很友好，所以我们从不说他们坏话。因为这些，学生们可以在我的学校取得好成绩。(你愿意来吗?)
我认为我的学校是世界上最好的学校之一，因为我们有好的老师，好的学生，一切都是美丽的。我喜欢它，每一个喜欢它。
