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There are many sports stars in the world. Do you know which is my favourite sport star? My favourite star is Yi Jianlian.
Yi Jianlian is a good basketballer. He is born in Heshan, Guangdong. He is 2.12 meters tall and 113 kilos. He is taller than many people, and he is hangsome and kind. He works hard in the match and in the training. So his coach and team friends all like him.
Yi Jianlian began his career quite early. When he was fifteen years old, he came into CBA. In 20xx, he got the first gold medal——Asia Youth championship’s champion. After that, he helped Guangdong team win 3 gold medals from 20xx to 20xx CBA championships. And he von the CBA MVP from 20xx to 20xx. In 20xx Asian Games, he got 16.6 points and 10.3 rebounds. He was the greatest basketball player in PRC, in 20xx, I think.
On June 28th, 20xx, Yi Jianlian came into NBA! All the Chinese people were excited. Because he is the fourth Chinese basketballer who came into NBA. All the people hope he can become better and better..
Yi Jianlian is good at playing basketball. And he is handsome, friendly, kind and so on. So he has a lot of basketball fans in the world. My mother and I are both his fans.
Yi Jianlian is my favourite star. I think, Yi Jianlian will be a famous basketball star in the world later. All the people on the earth will know him!
【译文】
大家好,我是刘东东。我是一名学生。有三个人在我的父亲,母亲和我。
我的父亲是40岁。他是一个工人。我认为他是一个好工人。因为他工作很努力。他每天起床很早,每天工作10小时以上。所以他总是很忙,他回家时,他看起来很累。他喜欢看报纸。晚饭后他通常读它。所以他得到了很多新闻。
我妈妈是38岁。她是一个工人。她在一个非常小的工厂工作。她不高,她有两个大眼睛。她爱我,她对我很好。她总是为我买了一些书。她想让我成为一个优等生。她还关心我的饮食和生活。
我15岁。我戴眼镜。我喜欢阅读。放学后我经常读书。我也喜欢唱歌。我最喜欢的歌手是周杰伦。他的音乐非常好。你觉得他怎么样?我也喜欢交朋友。如果你想认识我,请写信给我。
哦,我的父母爱我,我也爱他们。我的家庭是一个幸福的家庭。