照片背后的故事
在过去的日子里，我们曾经欢笑，也曾经哭泣……照片，或将这些精彩定格，或勾起你对往事的回忆。某英语网站向你发出邀请。请你按要求用英语写一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
故事必须原创;
80-120词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
描述你的照片(时间，地点，人物……);
分享你的故事(起因，经过，结果……);
谈谈你的感受(感动，怀念，影响……)。
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
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【写作点拨】本文要求围绕“照片”叙述一个与之相关的故事，是一篇记叙文。根据参考要点可知，文章属于经典“三段式”的写作：1. 描述照片拍摄的时间、地点和人物等基本信息;2. 叙述与照片相关的故事，包括起因、经过和结果等;3. 谈论对事情的感受。写作过程中，要注意时态的变化：描述过去发生的事情主要用一般过去时，谈论对事情的感受主要用一般现在时。
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This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!
