我最喜欢的乐队(My favourite band)
My favourite band is BEYOND.I like the band this is why like it.BEYOND is one of most popular bands in China.There are four people in it. They are Wang Jiaju,Wang Jiaqiang,Wang Guanzhong and Ye Shirong.They are tall.All of them have long hair.They look very cool.And they like music very much.Their songs sound very nice.So when I listen to them,I feel very excited.I hope they will make more nice songs.
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我最喜欢的乐队是BEYOND。我喜欢这个乐队，BEYOND是一个在中国最受欢迎的乐队有四人。他们是由黄家驹、黄贯中、黄家强、叶世荣。他们是高的。他们都有长头发。他们看起来很酷，他们很喜欢音乐，他们的歌曲听起来很不错，所以当我听他们的，我感到很兴奋。我希望他们能做更多好听的歌。
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