引议联结读后感范文1
Jane Eyre, is a poor but aspiring, small in body but huge in soul, obscure but self-respecting girl.
After we close the covers of the book, after having a long journey of the spirit, Jane Eyre, a marvelous figure, has left us so much to recall and to think: We remember her goodness: for someone who lost arms and blinded in eyes, for someone who despised her for her ordinariness, and even for someone who had hurt her deeply in the past. We remember her pursuit of justice. It's like a companion with the goodness.
But still, a virtuous person should promote the goodness on one side and must check the badness on the other side. We remember her self-respect and the clear situation on equality.
In her opinion, everyone is the same at the God's feet. Though there are differences in status、in property and also in appearance, but all the human being are equal in personality. We also remember her striving for life, her toughness and her confidence… When we think of this girl, what she gave us was not a pretty face or a transcendent temperament that make us admire deeply, but a huge charm of her personality.
Actually, she wasn't pretty, and of course, the ordinary appearance didn't make others feel good of her, even her own aunt felt disgusted with it. And some others even thought that she was easy to look down on and to tease, so when Miss Ingram met Jane Eyre, she seemed quite contemptuous, for that she was obviously much more prettier than 'the plain and ugly governess'. But as the little governess had said: 'Do you think, because I am poor, obscure, plain, and little, I am soulless and heartless?
You think wrong!' This is the idea of equality in Jane Eyre's mind. God hadn't given her beauty and weh, but instead, God gave her a kind mind and a thinking brain. Her idea of equality and self-respect impress us so much and let us feel the power inside her body.
In my mind, though a person's beauty on the face can make others once feel that one is attractive and charming, if his or her mind isn't the same beautiful as the appearance, such as beauty cannot last for, when others find that the beauty which had charmed them was only a falsity, it's not true, they will like the person no more.
For a long time, only a person's GREat virtue, a noble soul, a beautiful heart can be called as AN EVERLASTING BEAUTY, just as Kahill Gibran has said, that 'Beauty is a heart enflamed and a soul enchanted'.
I can feel that how beauty really is, as we are all fleshly men, so we can't distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but fleshly men, so we can't distinguish whether a man is of nobleness or humbleness, but as there are great differences in our souls, and from that, we can know that whether a man is noble or ordinary, and even obscure, that is, whether he is beautiful or not. Her story makes us thinking about life and we learn much from her experience, at least, that is a fresh new recognition of the real beauty.
引议联结读后感范文2
引议联结作文模式训练法
笔者多次参加省高考阅卷,从阅卷来看。给材料作文或思辩性强的话题作文,比较适宜写成议论文。议论文普遍受到阅卷老师的青睐,得分相对较高。遗憾的是,许多考生在写作时存在观点不明、结构不清、衔接不自然、材料不丰富等问题。那么如何才能写好议论文呢?下面介绍一种常见的议论文写作模式——引议联结法。
一般地说,材料作文大多比较适合写议论文,它除了具有议论文的一般特点外,在结构模式上,还有其自己特点,通常采用的基本模式,可概括为“引”、“议”(或“评”)、“联”、“结”四个字。下面分别说明:
1.引——就是引述材料作话题,揭示论点或提出问题。它属于“引论”的部分。最好从提出论点的需要出发,抓住材料要旨,用简洁的语言,准确地引述。一般说来,材料不同,引述方式各异:文字多的叙述性材料应概述,精辟的名言警句要复述,寓意深刻内蕴丰富的文字要阐述,漫画型材料要对画面作简洁介绍和扼要阐述。
引,一般写在第一自然段,要求从材料中引出恰当的中心论点。那么从哪些材料中引出中心论点呢?可以考虑从以下几个方面:
(1)一句话。主要是一句名言、格言、警句、俗语,甚至谚语和哲理性的话。例如从孟子的“老吾老,以及人之老;幼吾幼,以及人之幼”可引出论点“提倡尊老爱幼”。再如“欲穷千里目,更上一层楼”可引出论点“只有站得高才能看得远”。
(2)一种现象。如从“逢年过节,大吃大喝,铺张浪费”可引出论点“成由节俭败由奢”;又如从中学生早恋现象引出论点“早恋,成功的绊脚石”。
(3)一件事情。如从一起严重的交通事故可引出论点“车祸猛于虎。生命价更高”。当然,近年的高考,几乎都是材料作文。而材料本身就写了一种现象或一件事情。尤其要认真读懂材料,深刻领悟材料。三言两语,击中要害,干脆利落,恰当而迅速地引出中心论点。
从材料中引出的中心论点,语句要通顺、凝练,绝不能是病句。可以是一个对偶句、判断句,可以是简短的哲理性的话。中心论点要正确、鲜明、新颖。正确,就是符合马列主义^v^思想,符合时代要求,符合社会普遍追求的积极的人生观、世界观、价值观。鲜明,就是赞扬什么,批评什么,褒什么贬什么,要旗帜鲜明,态度明确,不能模棱两可,似是而非,甚至错误。新颖,有时代感,有独特的见解。中心论点书写时也可独立成段。
2.议——针对材料,作出必要的分析。既要简要地分析上文引用的材料,又要由此稍作生发,拓宽思路,为下文展开议论联系实际张本。这是由“引论”到“本论”的过渡性文字,有承上启下的作用。议,一般可以采用几个分论点的形式。每个分论点,语言要凝练、简洁,可以独立成段,也可以把几个分论点写成一段。力求醒目,结构清晰,思路清楚。分论点要倾情打造,要生动,有意蕴。结构基本一致,内容彼此相关,要能扣住中心论点,扣住题目。扣住话题。否则,就有偏题之嫌。结构上,分论点之间可以是并列式的,也可以是对照式的,也可以是递进式的,递进式的分论点,可从时间、空间、大小的角度思考,可由浅入深,由此及彼,由古及今,由中到外,由个人到国家,由自然到人类社会等。
那么,如何来拟分论点呢?可以采用“类、因、法、果”构思法。
“类”——“是什么”,解决的是对象问题,从话题、文题中选关键词提问。如《美丽的梦想》,关键词是“梦想”,可从“梦想是什么”拟三个分论点。
“因”——“为什么”,解决的是原因问题,如《美丽的梦想》,“为什么要有梦想”,“折射现实情况如何”并顺此提出分论点。
“法”——“怎么办”,即解决问题的方法。可从“怎样去实现美丽的梦想”拟三个分论点。“果”——“怎么样”,即问题得以解决后“我”的态度和体验,如《美丽的梦想》,“梦想实现后我会有怎样的表现,或梦想没有实现我会如何坚定地追求”。当然,“类、因、法、果”不需要在一篇文章中面面俱到,只要选择一两个方面即可。用作展开的一两个方面,一定是自己体验最深刻,认识最独到,占有材料最丰富的优势方面。
“议”是文章“猪肚”部分,要材料丰富,内容充实,有说服力。要采用摆事实和讲道理相结合的方法议论,恰当地使用古今中外的名人名家事例作论据。论据要准确、典型、丰富。准确,就是所举事实要真实,不杜撰,不张冠李戴,能用来充分证明其分论点或中心论点。典型,就是有历史代表性。丰富,就是论据要多,要有说服力,使人看后不得不服。事实论据可以是正面的,也可是反面的。要概括、压缩,不要堆砌事例,也不要大段大段地叙述某个事例。一定要结合论点对事例作针对性分析,且注意事例间的过渡和衔接。事实论据要能证明其论点,不要生拉硬拽,牵强附会,人为地给论据和论点之间架起桥梁。如“尊老爱幼”话题,可举事例:①西晋李密“陈情一表”、宋代杨时“程门立雪”,武汉“暴走妈妈”陈玉蓉。②^v^作了元帅亲自为病弱母亲洗衣洗裤。③春秋时,幼小的子路翻山越岭走几十里山路去亲戚家借米为年迈父母煮粥。④感动中国人物林秀贞,30年来先后义务赡养6位非亲非故老人,并资助十多名下岗职工幼小的子女读书。⑤洪战辉十几年如一日赡养病重母亲、疯子爸爸和抚养幼小的妹妹。
除了摆事实外,还应有讲道理。可采用事理论据,如名人名言、格言警句、俗语谚语等等。要有点辩证分析,符合哲学观点,短短几十字,还可防止将论点极端化以后出现漏洞。如话题“偏见与关系”,如果论点是“要搞好关系,就不要有偏见”,那么是不是有了偏见就一定搞不好关系呢?再如论点如果是“人必须要有自信”,那么可能有人说自负也是一种自信,所以在议论时必须指出,不能将自信和自负混为一谈。这样,文章严密,无懈可击。讲道理可以巧借名言,把别人的话用自己的语言并结合论点进行议论。如论证论点“勤奋,成功的保证”,可以借名言“业精于勤荒于嬉”来讲道理:“一个人要想在事业上有所成就,就必须勤奋。玩耍,只能荒废事业,使人一事无成。”讲道理亦可从反面来分析,从假设来理解。如论证论点“磨砺铸造人生”可这样写:“假如司马迁在遭受宫刑后萎靡不振,经不住挫折,受不起磨砺,他会完成„史家之绝唱,无韵之离骚‟的《史记》吗?” ③联——即联系实际,展开分析论证,这是文章成败的关键之所在。要注意做到以下几点:必须使论证充实而严密;必须选择典型而有说服力的事实作论据;必须作由此及彼由表及里的分析,做到有理有据。
引议联结读后感范文3
《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这部小说我在假期中已经看了好几遍了,我深深地被主人公所吸引。
主人公保尔·柯察金吧,他的一生非常坎坷,然而他凭自己的毅力和信念使自己继续活下去,老天也使他有了三次生命。自从认识水兵朱赫来以来,他的心被^v^吸引住了。经过几番波折,他终于如愿以偿,成为了一名^v^员。他出生入死,英勇杀敌。在战争中他也受了不少伤。最严重的一次就是被弹片击中头部,死里逃生。痊愈后,保尔没有忘记党,拿起新的武器,重返战斗队伍,开始了新的生活!小说主人公保尔·柯察金早年丧父,12岁被母亲送去车站食堂洗碗,饱受苦难。后到发电厂烧火,认识了朱赫来,他十几岁就立足杀场,英勇杀敌,热爱祖国,在战场上,他被砍了好几刀都大难不死,为什么仍然是毅力。年轻的他后来疾病缠身,但他仍不停地忘我工作。
读完这本书后,我觉得,其实,人生就如同炼钢!没有什么东西是可以走捷近的,“铁”变成“钢”,只有一种途径就是炼!有人说保尔的英勇是天生的,然而,在这个世界上是没有天生的英雄的。保尔之所以能够成为英雄,完全是由于自身的努力在战火纷飞的战场,面对生与死的考验,他并没有退缩;在建设工地,面对难以忍受的工作量和饥寒,他没有倒下;在双目失明、疾病缠身的情况下,面对稿子丢失、体质下降,他仍没有对命运屈服,终于从一个出身贫苦的少年,成长为一名具有崇高理想、高尚品格和顽强作风的共产主义战士。保尔,在生命的轨道中越挫越勇,永不放弃对革命的热情,有着燃烧不完的斗志。
每当我遇到困难而退缩时,我会想起保尔,每当我受挫折而落泪时,我会想起保尔。保尔·柯察金时时激励着我,鞭策着我,使我不懈努力,战胜一切困难。‘
引议联结读后感范文4
this year summer vacation, i read the american well-known writer hemingway's novel ^v^ old person and sea ^v^. i extremely admire in the novel the senior fisherman's will, he let me understand one person certainly must have relentless spirit, only then could obtain successfully.
the novel description is one year near sixty years of age senior fisherman, when alone goes to sea in one fishing, fished one big fish, actually did not pull. the senior fisherman socialized several days after the fish, only then discovered this was the big marlin which one surpassed the oneself fishing boat several fold, although knew perfectly well very difficult to win, but still did not give up. afterwards and further because in the big marlin wound fish fishy smell brought in several crowds of shark fish xxxes the food, but the old person still did not hope like this to give up, finally highlighted encircles tightly, returned to the big fish belt the fishing port, lets other fishermen not admire already.
when i read ^v^ the senior fisherman think: here to the seacoast really was too near, perhaps could have a bigger fish in a farther place... ^v^ when, i extremely admire this senior fisherman, because he by now already projected on some fish, but he had not settled to the present situation, but was approaches the bigger goal advance. again has a look us, usually meets one slightly is difficult, we all plain incessantly. we will be the motherland future, will be supposed to like this old person same mind lofty aspiration, will even better pursue even better, the bigger goal.
when i read ^v^ the big marlin start fast to gather round the young fishing boat hover, twined the cable on the mast , the old person right hand lifted up high the steel fork, leapt the water surface in it the flash, did utmost throws to its heart, one wail ended the big fish's life, it was static static floats on the water surface... ^v^ when, my heart also liked together the big stone falls. i extremely admire old person that kind do not dread, the relentless spirit, although knows the match strength is very strong, but he not slightly flinches, but is weles difficultly above. just because had this kind of spirit, the senior fisherman only then achieved this life and death contest success. we also must study senior fisherman's spirit in life, handles the matter does not fear the difficulty, only then can obtain successfully.
引议联结读后感范文5
The final goodbye to my very pity, the little prince want to can have a more magical magic to keep his body, more to retain his soul, so the fox and the pilot would not be thinking of the wheat color with golden hair.
But I knew it was impossible, because on the other star, the only rose in his heart was the one that lived in the star called b-612.
引议联结读后感范文6
In the world history of literature, some many classical famous works are going to be immortal, but Jane Eyre deeply enters people's soul deeply, it by irresistible intrinsic deep has attracted the tens of thousands of readers deeply, has affected people's inner world, is in the world history of literature the eternal classics.
Jane Eyre's author Charlotte Bronte and howls the mountain village author Amy Li · Bronte is sisters. Although two people live in the identical family and the social environment, but disposition actually entirely different. Charlotte Bronte the natural disposition is arrogant, pursues and yearns for all fine things. She from has slightly lost the maternal love, obtains the father likes very being also few, her appearance is thin and small, also is unattractive, Jane Eyre's contour is completely Charlotte Bronte the real portrayal. Charlotte Bronte perhaps on because own appearance is not conspicuous, created her innermost soul depth to feel inferior deeply, reflected in hers disposition was the sensitive self-respect.
Jane Eyre double perishes from the little parents, lives under subjugation, not only cousins' insult, despising which the aunt not covers up, to has lodged the school, but also must receive teacher the unfair treatment. Is precisely all these, let Jane Eyre practice on the self-confident spirit which stood buffer, caused Mr. Rochester to shock for it, regarded as her to be possible with own energetic equality conversation person, and deep has fallen in love with her deeply. His sincerity lets her be moved, she decided entrusts for his life. But in the marriage that one day, the accident knew actually in addition has madame who contracts neurosis, life in Sand field’s top layer. She said righteously to that, “You thought I poor, mean, am not beautiful, am diminutive, I do not have the soul, has not had the heart? - - You thought mistakenly! - - Jan · likes with you having the soul - - also completely to have a heart equally! … I not am relying on the custom, the convention now, even not relies on the human body every tire bead heel you to converse, but is my mind in with yours mind speech, as soon as probably we all leave the world, two people stand equally in front of God - - because we are originally equal!”
This also is Jane Eyre tells her to have to leave his reason: “I must defend this standpoint firmly.” Deeper one is Jane Eyre thought oneself received own to trust human's deceit. Asked which woman can withstand oneself human's deceit which most intimate, most trusts. In such situation, Jane Eyre has also made an unusual rational decision. Has unusual strength love surrounding in such one, but also has under the wealthy life enticement, she still must persist from already individual dignity.
I thought, if it is me, I definitely at that time forgave , I could use each reason to convince oneself remain down, But Jan does not have, she chose resolutely left. This also is precisely Jane Eyre is most lovable, the most valuable place - - persists own principle.
The novel has designed a very bright ending. 's manor has destroyed; he has also become a disabled person. Between such situation, Jane Eyre no longer and loves the contradiction in the dignity. But simultaneously obtains satisfies——She and 's marriage has the dignity, simultaneously also has the love.
In the modern society, the very few some people can look like Jane Eyre to be same, is love, gets rid all for the personality, moreover is duty-bound not to turn back. The pursue entire heart pays, moreover a pure like ice water……
引议联结读后感范文7
Shakspere (wrong spelling) created Hamlet--a man with wisdom and courage .In order to revenge on his uncle for killing his father, he pretented (spelling mistake) to be mad and suffered a series of misery. On the contrary, we can also say that Hamlet is rude and selfish for he did not think twice before his revenge . if (Capitalize ^v^If^v^ since it is the beginning word of the sentence.) a country has no king, how can a country keep alive (You need a question mark here since it is a question.) So, every thing has two sides, the bright side and adumbral side. Every time we make a decision we have to think twice.
Comment:
Be careful with your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Too many uncessary mistakes.
It is good that you looked at both the dark and bright sides of Hamlet. Thats quite objective and convincing.
引议联结读后感范文8
生命属于人们只有一次。人的一生应当这样度过:当他回首往事时他不致因虚度年华而悔恨,也不因碌碌无为而羞耻……
这虽然是我第二次阅读这本书了,但奥斯特洛夫斯基极其严肃的创作态度依然使我震撼。
在这本书中:
保尔是一个自觉的、无私的革命战士,他总是把党和祖国的利益放在第一位;他更是一个刚毅坚强的革命战士,在人生各个方面都经受住了严峻的考验;保尔又是一个平凡间伟大的英雄人物。他顽强、执着、刻苦、奋进、不为命运所屈服,自我牺牲的精神和坚定不移的信念让我为之钦佩。
朱赫来是一个坚强的红军战士,他勇敢、机智,善于领导和组织群众,他在革命中很好地团结了广大的工人和教育了无数的青年,保尔也就是在他的影响下逐渐成长起来。
丽达是一个优秀的^v^员,是真正值得也是保尔深爱的对象。她漂亮、机智,打扮简单而干练,心地善良而坚定。她的爱憎分明使我感动。
合上最后一页时,心中不由得产生了一种羞愧之情。在我的世界里只有我自己。
遇到困难,我只会往后退缩,不会迎难而上。
碰到烦心事,我只会抱怨,不会冷静下来想办法。
如果有时不开心,只会有着自己发泄,从来不会顾及别人的感受。
保尔像我这么大时,为了不让母亲因为生计更加劳累,早已去做那永不是尽头的苦工。而我呢,安安逸逸地坐在教室里上课,接受最美好的教育,什么都不用担心。
不知道为什么,在读完《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这一本书后,脑海中竟有无限的感慨。也许是因为我被保尔精彩的人生所吸引了吧,我开始想要一个不一样的人生。
人活着,不应该追求生命的长度,而应该追求生命的质量。不是吗?
朱赫来的一句“钢铁就是这样炼成的”惊醒了梦中人,看来我也应该像保尔一样去炼就我人生中的钢铁。
引议联结读后感范文9
引议联结 有感于读-读后感写作训练
知识要点:
1、读后感是读了别人的文章或著作之后,把自己的感想、体会写出来的一种文章形式。
2、读后感通常包括两个部分:读和感。“读”是基础,“感”是由“读”引发的,只有读懂原文,才能有“感”可言。
3、读后感有叙有议,以议为主,属议论文范畴。教学目标
让学生了解读后感的基本结构,把握读后感的一般写法
教学步骤
一、读后感是读书笔记的一种形式,有时也被称作感想性议论文。日常生活中我们阅读一本书、学习一篇文章或读了一首诗之后,把所产生的感想、体会和收获写出来这就是读后感。无疑“感”是核心,“感”可以是从书中领悟出来的真切道理或精湛的思想;也可以是受书中内容的启发而引起的思考与联想;也可以是因读书而激发出来的决心和理想;也可以是因读书而引起的对社会上某些现象的感触和评论。
二、读后感的突出特点即“读”是“感”的基础,“感”是“读”的结果,“感”因“读”而来,所以首先得在“读”上下功夫。第一步就要认真阅读原文,力求融会贯通地掌握文章的思想内容,乃至语言文字表达上的特点。一般说来,我们可以从读懂词句了解内容入手,进而理解文章的难点、疑点,掌握文章的中心,理清文章的思路。同时,还可以把文中的内容同历史的经验、社会生活以及个人的实际联系起来,认真思索广泛联想。这样,读书的感受才会丰富,才会深入具体,从而为写好读后感打下坚实的基础。
切记:认真、仔细地读是写好读后感的前提!
三、读后感写作的一般结构是:引——议——联——结
1、引——围绕感点,引述材料。“读是感”的基础,写“感”不能离开原文的内容,更不能从头至尾没有对原文的简要介绍。如果不这样做,“读”和“感”就脱节了,“感”便成了无源之水。是不正确的。把原文中你觉得很好、很受感动的地方,你感受最深的那件事,引述到文中来。可以直接摘抄原文的重点语句,然后写感想;也可以间接叙述原文内容,点出感想是从何处产生的。总之,一定要交代清楚“感”的由来。但要记住:“感”是文章主体,因此行文过程中内容安排上要注意“读”和“感”的比例。课文内容引用不要太长、太细,否则会喧宾夺主。很多同学只有“读”而无“感”,照抄原文,以引述代替感想的写法成了对书的内容介绍,从而使文章本末倒置。
2、议——分析材料,提炼感点。在引出“读”的内容后,要对“读”进行一番评析。既可就事论事对所“引”的内容作一番分析;也可以由现象到本质,由个别到一般地作一番挖掘;对寓意深刻的材料更要作一番分析,然后水到渠成地“亮”出自己的感点。注意一定要把自己真实的感受写出来,还要写得具体,这样才能让人信服。要抓住体会最深的一两点,任何一篇文章,读完后受到的触动是多方面的,如果不加选择,面面俱到,泛泛的谈,那就根本什么也说不清楚,所以要选择自己体会最深刻、有独到见解的感受来写。千万不能“感”到哪里就写到哪里。那么如何选择感受的角度呢?注意以下两点:
(1)、选择你能发掘出深度的角度来写,不可勉为其难。
(2)、感受点要有新意,切忌千人一面,所以写作时要全面透彻地理解文章实质,紧扣原文中心同时从不同角度去想,就会有不同的感受和启发。例如:《孙权劝学》一课,我们可以从吕蒙接受别人的意见角度来写,也可以从孙权善于劝说引导来谈,也可从学习的内因外因、鲁肃重
学识等角度来写。
读后感应力求入情入理、新鲜、活泼。有些同学写读后感或是板着面孔议论一番,或是痛心疾首自责一番,前者往往流于枯燥,后者则不大自然。要做到这一点,首要的是“言必由衷”,“情动于中而发于辞”,只有深受启发,确有所得,才能以理服人,以情动人。
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3、联——联系实际,纵横拓展。它有两层意思:一是对原文进行材料分析、评论;二是要针对自己的感受联系实际生活,这是很重要的一步。
对原文进行材料分析评论要略写但却不要不写,与实际生活的联系非常必要也非常重要。联系实际才能使文章有可读性、有价值。由原文推而广之,使原文的内容得到充分发挥,同时自己对原文的体会也会更深刻。可以联系自己的思想实际、工作实际、社会实际、现实生活及其他方面的实际,这一点是读后感的重要特点之一,也是区别于其他文体的主要界限。当然,联系实际并不是漫无边际地去联系,而也必须如写议论文那样有很强的针对性,也就是说要有的放矢,决不能泛泛而谈,牵强附会,生拉硬扯,要自然,要和情和理。
联系实际要注意以下几点:
(1)、联系自己个人生活,不要写成自己某项成绩的汇报,也不要写成检讨书。
(2)、联系社会生活实际,一定要实事求是,注意分寸,不说假话、大话、空话、。这样才能不空洞,才能言中有物,深中肯綮。
(3)、联系实际时还要力争情理真切。情真才能感人;理切才有力量。切不可言不由衷,胡编乱造。
(4)联系实际时,联想要丰富。多关心国家大事、社会热点、各个领域的突出表现的人和事,多选择新近发生的新人新事,体现与时俱进的特点。
4、结——总结全文,升华感点。总结既可以回应前文,强调感点;也可以提出希望,发出号召。不管采取哪种方式结尾,都必须与前文贯通,浑然一体。读后感始终要受“读”的约束,开头要引“读”,中间还要不时地回扣“读”的内容,结尾也要恰当回扣“读”的内容不放松。
总之,写好一篇读后感无论怎样都不能只有引述没有感想,也不能人云亦云的重复别人的观点,应从文中提炼出新观点,结合现实生活,从新的角度写出内容较为深刻、又颇具新意的读后感。
根据下面的材料,自选取角度,自拟题目,写一谝不少于800字的议论文。
1814年,英国人史蒂芬逊制造出世界上第一辆蒸气机车,当时有人驾着一国辆马车和它赛跑。新生的火车丑陋笨重。走得很慢,漂亮的马车骄傲地跑在彰面。而且火车由于没装弹簧,把路基都震坏了。然而^v^逊并没因比赛失败而灰心,他不断改进机车,坚信火车具有马车所无法媲美的前途。100多年过去了,马车仍按原来的速度转动着轮子,而火车却在飞速前进,高速火车每小时可达200公里,试验性火车的速度更为惊人。
这道题,要求就此写一则读后感,如何才能掌握读后感的写作方式`呢?下面分析一篇文章,从中可以得到一些启示。
例文一
“失败是成功之母”
——由世界上第一辆火车跑不过马车谈起
当我看完了世上第一辆炎车和马车赛跑,竟然远远落后于马车的故事后,再看到现在高速成火车时速已达两百公里,不由得想起了我国的一句名谚:失败是成功之母。
(引、揭。开篇概引材料,揭示中心:失败是成功之母。文章抓住所供材料的重点有目的地引材,由材料到论点,简洁恰当而又鲜明。)
假如火车的发明者因为最初的火车头跑不过马车而灰心丧气,不去找毛病,不去想办法改进,那么也许直到今天,人们仍然坐在马车上穿州过府,不知火车头为何物呢!没有第一次的失败,又怎会有以后的成功呢!