托福家庭版写作范文1
托福写作如何获取满分?这3种写法技巧不可不会
托福写作满分写法技巧：举实例
思维短路，举实例!提出一个观点，举实例!提出一个方案，举实例!而且这也是我们揭示一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子!
In order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型：
To take … as an example, One example is…, Another example is…, for example
托福写作满分写法技巧：做比较
方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的;又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的;
世界上没有同样的指纹，没有相同的树叶，文章亦同，只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点(through comparison)和不同点(through contrast)。下面是一些短语：
相似的比较：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比较：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …, …
托福写作满分写法技巧：换言之
没话说了，可以换一句话再说，让你的文章再多一些字，或者文绉绉地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。
实际就是重复重复再重复!下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!
I am enthusiastic about you. That is to say, I love you.
I am wild about you. In other words, I have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我们举过的例子：
I cannot bear it.
可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.
因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it. That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.
更多短语：
in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply
托福写作之结构性词汇介绍
英文写作和中文写作在行文习惯和逻辑上都有很大的差别，这一点之前在之前介绍如何解决指代不明的问题时就已经提到过了。整体上看，相比于中国(或者说东方)风格的婉转隐晦，美国人则更坚持简洁明了。那么从行文习惯上，这个特点有一个很常见的体现，那就是结构性词汇的使用。这里所说的结构性词汇是我自己起的名字，可能不同的人有不同的说法。这些词汇在文章当中的作用就是表明和构建框架，告诉读者每一部分的内容分别是什么。它们与逻辑关联词的最终目的相似，都是为了使文章看起来调理更加清晰、结构更加合理。
对于综合写作来说，各位老师通常为同学们提供的模板当中很多都是结构性词汇，最典型的就是序数词和类似序数词作用的一些表达。简单的有first，second，third，高级一些的有first of all，moreover，in addition等等。这些是用来分隔和标明综合写作的三段主体段，方便读者(即阅卷人)理解和寻找要点。另外很重要的一种结构性词汇就是“阅读文章提到”“听力部分认为”等等这类说明观点持有者身份的部分。有了这些我们才能明确下面我们所体现的内容到底是哪一份材料的观点，从而避免歧义。
对于独立写作，结构性词汇也有非常重要的作用。与综合写作相同的就是我们需要用到分隔并标明分论点的序数词。这些序数词或者类似功能的词汇出现，读者就能意识到后面一般会紧跟着一个主体段的分论点。除此之外，为了体现清晰的结构脉络，主体段内其他几个关键环节(比如“说理”和“论据”)也需要结构性词汇的引入。比如说理，即把主旨句当中的理由再表达得更清晰明确一些，所以引入说理环节的结构性词汇就可以是：
1. That is to say, ...
2. To be more specific, ...
3. In other words, ...
他们的意思也很简单，分别是“那就是说”“更具体地说”“换句话说”。而引入论据的方式就更简单了，for example/take an example等等都很常见。
关于结构性词汇的重要性，笔者也是在美国留学的过程中逐渐意识到的。因为在自己的essay甚至论文当中，导师和写作指导都曾或多或少强调了这些词汇的重要性。也就是说，一旦内容上进入了不同的部分或者环节，就应该用明确的标志物表明这种转换。当然文中提到的一些结构性词汇还是非常简单的几个，同学们可以询问老师或课后自行积累，以获得更多逼格更高更地道的表达。
托福写作：教你搞定“非主流”题型
每次一到考试，就“惊吓”的发现，独立写作种你复习的题型都巧妙的避开了所考题型!是不是很无语呢，尤其是当考试出现了【三选一与问题分析类】“非主流”题型，这类题型是近年来总是会突然袭击的考题，而且是很多童鞋都会忽略的题型!
今天，就带大家一起来GET【三选一与问题分析类】题型写作思路及技巧，分分钟教你拿下高分!
三选一与问题分析类题型
【三选一】作为托福独立写作中的一类常见题，通常会基于某个话题给出三个选项，让童鞋们挑选其中一个认为最好的进行展开讨论，例如：
Which way do you think is the best for a student to make friends?
Join a sports team，participate in community activities or travel?
每当托福考生遇到这样的题目，内心一定是崩溃的，一方面因为我们写惯了二选一比较级类型题，思路是比较模式化的，然而对于三选一题目准备并不充分，导致考场思路严重短路。
【问题分析类】是比较罕见的一类题型，但考试碰见这类题型，还是比较蒙圈的，通常是给出一个问题，让童鞋们分析论证。
如何搞定写作难题?
三选一与问题分析类题目作为独立写作偏议论文的文体，考生需要在一定时间内自圆其说地表明自己的立场，并给出相应的论证说理和事实举例。
三选一，到底选哪个?
对于有“纠结症”的童鞋，三选一写作就有些困难了，三个选项看起来都好有道理的样子，如何才能表明自己的立场呢?这时候，你就需要知道考官想要你选哪个，去“迎合”考官的口味!
题型结构和思路
那三选一与问题分析类题目的题型，与其他题型有哪些不同呢?在复习备考中，童鞋们需要提前熟悉和了解这类题型的结构、思路拓展与梳理!
托福写作思路解析：国外产品比国内好
新托福写作题目：国外产品比国内好
We should buy domestic products, even though they may be more expensive than commodities that produced in foreign counties.
新托福写作思路解析：国外产品比国内好
选国外：1.质量好，对消费者有好处—例如买手机，中国人买苹果和三星，苹果质量好，且好看，系统稳定，可以下载很对的APP，例如啥的啥的。对人的生活有哪些帮助啊。三星的摄像头好，屏幕高清，系统很稳定的。
2.买好的国外产品能够促进行业之间的竞争，国内产品生产商也会致力于提升自己的产品质量，既利于消费者，也有利于国内的经济发展。例如车最近几年国产车有了很大的提升，例如红旗，比亚迪渐渐的走入了很多人的家庭，因为他不断的完善自己的产品, 迎合消费者的需求。
托福写作思路解析：现代人不如从前友好
新托福写作题目：现代人不如从前友好
Do you agree or disagree with the statement: The people in the past were friendlier than people today.
新托福写作思路解析：现代人不如从前友好
不同意：
论点：科技发展疏远人们关系，因此，人们显然不如从前友好了。
解释：人们过度依赖电子产品，减少了人际活动的次数
例子：多例，吃饭的时候，人们玩手机的现象更多了。坐公交时候，更多的人玩手机而忽略帮助需要帮助的人。在学校的时候，人们通过微信邮件沟通的方式也变的更多，面对面沟通的频率也大大下降。
结论：现在社会上越来越多的人变的冷漠，很大部分归咎于科技发展
论点：社会压力的增加使得人们有着更多负面情绪
解释：社会发展的必然趋势导致市民承受更多的压力，有意无意之间，人们内心就会积累着大量负面情绪。
例子：多例，一个软件工程师每天需要工作远超9小时，而且超负荷的脑力工作让他们变得精疲力尽，长时间的投入工作也使得他们承担过多压力。再例如证券公司的理财经理每天要分析大量数据更他们的客户带来收益的保障，这种枯燥的工作方式让他们会变的脾气更暴躁。结论：很明显，快节奏的生活以及工作方式是另外一个人们变的不像过去那么友好的因素。
让步段：诚然，教育的提升使得人们变的比过去更加有文化。然而，教育水平的发展过度重视的是生产力的提升而忽视了素质教育。
托福家庭版写作范文2
Family and career family when I say the word _career,_ what's the idea that goes through your mind? Why don't you connect the two topics? You might think, _a hard-working father works all day and only makes a few dollars. He's not family oriented._. No matter how busy you are and how important your job is to you, just like you are going to lose your job the next day, please don't forget to spend some time with your family and always remember _family first_.
中文翻译：
家庭和事业家庭当我说“事业”这个词的时候，你脑海中闪过的想法是什么？为什么你不把这两个话题联系起来呢，你可能会想“一个勤奋的父亲整天工作，只挣几美元，他不以家庭为本”。我想表达的是，无论你有多忙，你的工作对你有多重要，就像你第二天就要失业一样，请不要忘记花一些时间和你的家人在一起，永远记住“家庭第一”。
托福家庭版写作范文3
I support the idea that a factory to be built near our community. I list my reasons as follows. Firstly, a new factory near our community helps to improve living standard of people in our community. The factory will employ a lot of workers. As a consequence, the unemployment rate will drop significantly. Many people in our community will find a job in the factory. As people's income increases, they will be able to spend more money on their food, clothing and leisure time, and the quality of life will be increased.
Secondly, a new factory will bring prosperity to our community. The tax collected from a factory is an important source of revenue for our town. As people have higher income, income tax collected will also be increased. The town will be able to spend more money on infrastructures and other development. Moreover, in order to accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. This will boost real estate development in our community.
Some people say that a factory would bring smog and pollution, and destroy the quality of the air and water in town. This is not the truth. Modern technologies have made today's factories technology intensive and brought pollutions to the minimum. There are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should understand that society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.
Of course, there will be some drawbacks of building a new factory here. But in my opinion, the benefits outweigh the dangers. I strongly support to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way.
Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them withmodern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
作文范文：
It is a controversial problem that whether a city should preserve its old,historic buildings ordestroy them and replace them with modrn people think that a city shouldpreserve its old,historic buildings because they are the witness of the past,others think that a cityshould destroy them and replace them with modern buildings because they take up a lot of far as I am concerned, I prefer the previous idea that the old,historic buildings should be preserved.
Although the old,historic buildings would take up a lot of places and the modern society will need these places to building the new buildings such as skyscrapers,the old,historic buildings are thewitness of the is known that a modern city comes from the past history which had a valuable old,historic buildings could tell people what happened in the past andwhat was the past that,people could gain kownledge and experience to contribute to the modern society better.
The old,historic buildings could also be offered to can become the teaching basesfor is necessary for children to know the past,so that they can kown better about thepresent addition,children will be interested in the strange structure of the buildings andthe funny things in the buildings,which will promote the childern to study.
Finally,the preserved building would offer the important clues for archeologists to study the is more valuable to maintain them well than destroy them to build new ones.
In conclusion,the old,historic buildings should be preserved for the reasons is that theyare the witness of the past,then they could teach children something and last they are theimportant clues for archeologists.
An age of popular entertainment stars, talk show hosts,hi-pop singers , or even the cyber celebrities from the populaceare the group who are enjoying great fame and fact to young university students , entertainment is even more prevalent and needed. But a question is how to entertain them better - performance by the student actors, the concert by professional musicians or a lecture by a professor? Based on the thorough analysis, the plan of students’ performance in theatre will be the first choice .
First , the plan of students’ performance in theatre, rather than the plan of concert by professionals and the one of lecture by professors ,will attract a wider range of students to engage in such an entertainment .
Second , my proposal rather than the counterpart ones will better suit students taste-more enjoyment will be hoped.
Last , considering the classical masterpieces needed in rehearse, my suggestions will cultivate the more genuine and deeper love for appreciation for aesthetic values.
考试流程介绍
通常托福写作考试是接在托福口语考试后面，口语考试考完以后，会进入写作考试的界面。托福写作可分成两部分，即综合写作和独立写作：托福写作首先是综合写作20min，然后是独立写作30min。
考需要了解的问题：
综合托福写作的界面是什么?
独立托福写作的界面又是如何的?
左侧是给出的论述题目，右侧的空格输入内容，限时30分钟，300词，若提前答完并且检查无误以后，可以交卷。
考试注意事项介绍
综合写作
输入过程：
1.输入阅读部分
提升快速阅读能力，
首先文章主干(文章观点+论点)，其次理解阅读细节部分，
阅读技巧：开头段快速看背景，有利于理解文章观点，中间段看论点后细节部分，帮助更好理解文章论点
2.听力能力
捕捉听力文章主干(容易)，捕捉听力反驳细节(难度)，尽量的听到每一句反驳细节(更大难度)
3.输出文章
描述阅读和听力对应关系，描述听力内容，熟悉模版。描述过程中总结精炼阅读内容。
Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities requirestudents to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your answer.
托福写作满分作文范文：
The use of computer is increasingly popular in modern society. Some people think that thecomputer makes life more convenient and easier because they can compile documents, buy goodsthrough the Internet and do other works on the computer. Nevertheless, in my opinion, thecomputer makes life more complex and stressful. There are many instances supporting myopinion.
Before the computer was invented, people only need to learn the knowledge of mathematics,physics, chemistry and so on. However, today people have to learn how to operate the computer,to use a variety of software and if the computer does not work, people have to learn how to repairit. People have to learn not only the knowledge of software but also that of hardware. No endinglearning makes people exhausted and their life more complex.
The computer also makes life more stressful. The society in which we live is called _information society& quot ;. Thanks for the development of the computer, the rhythm of life are increasinglyrapid. The business men has so many meetings to attend, so many e-mails to deal with that theyhave no time to have his lunch. Some students have to work late on the computer to do the homework at night. There are more and more people struggling from the nervous sickness andcomplaining the _busy life_.
The rapid development of the computer makes people feel stressful, too. The new generation of the software and the hardware, the update of them, all of these make people have to pay more andmore time and money on their computers.
Although the computer has become an indispensable part of our life, it can be concluded from theabove statements that the computer makes life more complex and stressful.
Does technology make children less creative than in the past?
Are our kids becoming lazier and less creative, less imaginable than before as a consequence of highly advanced technology? My answer is no, and just the opposite, technology has apparently assisted our kids to become more creative.
First and foremost, technology has provided children with easy access to scientific and liberal art resources which is their best source of inspiration. For example, children could now easily gain access to academic databases through iPad screen, read classical works on Kindle, or watch historic documents on Internet. These great works are essentially helpful to arousing their curiosity and prepares them with key knowledge necessary for any creation. However, these wonderful equipments and facilities are never as handy in the past, when kids could only reach limited resources in public libraries or schools. In this sense, technology has provided the possibility for children to be more creative.
Second, technology has equipped children with professional apparatus which could finally realize their imagination. This takes form particularly as computer softwares and applications, such as Photoshop for creative graphic design, Overture for easily composing a piece of music, 3DMax for building up a virtual world, etc.. All the software were never as handy as they are at present, and this would absolutely provides our children an effective tool for realizing their creativity.
Third, technology itself is a market place where creative ideas are economically encouraged. Steve Jobs earned millions of dollars a year for his unparallel creation, and Mark Zuckberg gained his reputation for the genius social network. Therefore, technology has provided children the internal motive to develop their creativity.
However, it is undeniable that technology might make children become lazier and be comfortable with what is already available because everything are so convenient nowadays and there seems to be no way to improve them. Children lost in pc games or blindly pursuing every single piece of tech apparatus is a relevant example. Thus, it is always necessary to keep children’s mind active in the marvelous world of technology.
In a nutshell, I still regard children as becoming increasingly creative in technology development, although it might bring minor side effect. As along as we keep a balanced mood on children enjoying the fruit of technology, they are sure to contribute more to innovation than in the past.
In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specificreasons and details to develop your essay.
托福作文满分范文：
With the development of human society, people are living longer now. Many factors interactingtogether to enable the longer life. There are three most important causes: the quality of food hasbeen greatly improved; people could have medical services; more and more people realize thatregular sports benefit their health.
The improving quality of our food is the most important factor of the longer life. We could havenot only enough food as we want, but also the healthier food. When we preparing food, we nolonger consider the cost, but pay more attention to the nutritions of the food. With thedevelopment of transportation systems, inland people now could also enjoy seafood and tropicalfruit.
Furthermore, governments are paying more and more money on medical establishments. Citizenscould have medical services more easily. Because of the convenient medical service moreillnesses could be detected at an earlier stage. Also, many illnesses that had been considered fatalcould be cured today. The better detection and curement enable people's longer life.
Last but not least important is that people care more for their own health. Every morning youcould see people doing sports outside. More and more people have realized the saying _life islocomotion_. Regular sports build up a strong body. Naturally, people with stronger body couldresist more deseases.
To sum up, the development of our society causes the longer life of people. People have betterfood and better medical services. And people spend more time on sports to biuld up strongerbodies. As we could predict, people are going to live even longer.
在托福写作中，很多都尝试着去写让步段，但大部分考生的目的并不是让文章逻辑更加稳固，最大的目的是凑字数。那么真正的托福独立写作的让步段应该有什么作用?托福独立作文让步段应该如何写呢?
托福独立写作中，一个好的让步段会让文章的逻辑关系更严密，论证更丰富，更符合学术文章的要求。然而，很多考生尝试着写让步段，却也有凑字数的目的，无法发挥让步段的最佳威力。
到底怎样写出好的让步段?写还是不写?这是个问题很多同学有疑问，在一篇完整的独立作文中，让步段是不是一定要写呢?可不可以不写呢?让步段不是必须要写的，考生们可以在作文里只提出支持自己观点的两至三个正面的理由，这样也可以得出最后的结论。比如说是否同意新的科技产品发布，过段时间购买比马上购买要好，我们完全可以只提出过段时间购买的两个正面理由：
一. 价格会更便宜;
二. 产品的性能会更优化，这样整篇作文的论点还是明确的。
但是这篇文章当然也可以加上让步段，过段时间再买的坏处，或是马上购买的好处。这样会显得这篇文章论证的逻辑更加严密和全面，我们确实是进行了优劣对比后，才得出自己的观点。
尤其要注意的是，如果作文题目本身的观点的反面并不能够被忽略，那么建议让步段是一定要写的，这样显得我们得出自己的观点才不牵强。
比如作文题目Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.。我们可以写正面的两个观点，即玩电脑游戏的两个好处，但是我们同样不能忽略玩电脑游戏的坏处，所以就要写让步段了，不然观点就会显得过于偏激。
怎么写让步段?这又是个问题重中之重: 让一小步，进一大步!
让步段的最重要目的是对让步内容地不断削弱，以退为进，先提出坏处，然后再否定它。但是要记住的是让步段与支持段结构一致，也是有主题句，然后要对主题句进行展开解释。所以常见的套路是：主题句(不可否认A也有坏处)+解释(进一步解释说明坏处是什么)+让步(但是呢，这些坏处可以被解决掉，或是不太重要)
1.让步段主题句写法让步段的主题句一般是这样的：不可否认的是，A可能会有一些坏处。这里我们尽量语气要委婉些，下面是一些会用到的词组表达：——Admittedly / Undoubtedly / There is no denying that / It cannot be denied that——May / might / possibly / probably——One / one or two / a couple of / minor / several——To some extent / to some degree【常见错误】很多考生让步段用although开头，但是although后面只能跟一个从句，所以后面主题句的内容就没有办法展开了。
2. 让步如何实现让步段的表述可以参考以下模式：•让步方的好处比支持方的好处次要，或者支持方的坏处比起好处来次要。However, the advantages of A are more important than those of B.让步方优点与支持方优点比起来较少，或支持方缺点与优点比起来较少。However, the advantages of A are far more than those / that of , the advantages of A outnumber those / that of B.对方的好处，我方也可以有办法得到;我方的坏处可以有办法消除。However, the problem can be solved by …However, the negative influence can be eliminated by …
3. 让步段范例赏析Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.
主题句: Admittedly, playing computer games does harbor several drawbacks.
解释： Some children are addicted to playing computergames and ignore their studies, thereby suffering from poor academic performance. Also, over exposure to computer games with high concentration will sooner or later cause the impairment of their eyesight.
让步:However, most children are able to control themselves to play games in moderation. Also, their parents can intervene and supervise as well. Specifically, they could set strict rules on how much time their children could play games everyday and on what conditions they could do so, therefore it is completely unnecessary to forbid them to play computer games.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specificexamples to support our answer.
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Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time, can laterbecome valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why Ihold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we are going to facenumerous difficulties and obstacles, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become avaluable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows howto walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition,only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciateanything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.
Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most ofthe times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in ourlife and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, nopain, no gain. For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in,the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties.
And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The moredifficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learningand this stage is extremely efficient and our problem-solving skills well increase. After weovercome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and willbe able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problemagain. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.
In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as aprecious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place wouldyou prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city, so I have experienced the good and badsides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten yearsof living in one, I can't imagine ever living in a small town again.
Small towns and big cities both have some problems in terms of transportation. In a small town,you have to own a car to ensure a comfortable living. You can't get around without one becausethere isn't any kind of public transportation. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensiveparking, but there you have a choice of taking public transportation. It's not free, but it's oftencheaper than driving when you consider gas and time. Especially if you don't have a car, you'rebetter off in the city.
I love the excitement of big cities. Small towns have a slow pace. Large cities mean you have toadapt to a variety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a new restaurant. I enjoythat challenge very much. Another pan of the excitement of city living is the variety of culturalactivities available. There is a wide assortment of theatre, music and dance in big cities. These things are rare in small ones.
The final thing I like about large cities is the diversity of the people. The United States is made upof people of different races, religions, abilities, and interests. However, you seldom find such avariety of people in a smaller town. I think that living in an area where everyone was just like mewould quickly become boring.
Of course, security is a concern, and that's one area where small towns are superior to big , I would rather be a bit more cautious and live in a large city than to feel secure but bored.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students tolearn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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Many people in the world share a belief that grades make students work hard. I agree with theabove statement because I believe that high grades are more helpful in getting a bright future.
One of benefits of the high grade is that it promotes a learner's interest. Interest is the bestmotivation to encourage students to learn. If a learner has a good score in English, he will find thatEnglish is a beautiful language. For example I love to learn math, because it brings me happinesswhen I get a high score in a math exam. When I went to university, I select mach as my second reason is that schools give us a chance to learn knowledge, why not try our best to getit. In our lives these knowledge has important effect on our mind which need be wise by an by. Inaddition, self-credit may be instruct by good marks. It is also important to our life.
A further solid argument for the high grade is that it means a good future career. Many companieswould rather hire students who are with high grades.
As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that there are main reasons why I support thatgrades encourage students to learn. Firstly, high scores spring learner' interests. Secondly, studentsget self-credit through it. Furthermore, A good job may wait these students who have high marks.
Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else, or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for anemployer. Personally, I prefer to work for myself. I choose to be self-employed because of thereasons as follows.
I can decide what I do according my own willing and interest. This point is the most importantbecause one person can find work motivity from his interest. I also can decide how to do thething. I can choose my own directions and ways, whereas those who are employed by others mustdo work according to the directions of their employers.
The other important point is that I have freedom to decide when I do the thing. The time I work isdetermined by myself. I am not constricted by other people. Hence, if I am tired, I can rest in thedaytime; if I have more energy, I can work late at night. I have more freedom on the choice ofwork time than those who work for an employer.
I work for myself, so I only can depend on myself. This can train me to learn more knowledge andto work hard and teach me to face the success and the failure correctly. I can learn how to takeadvantage of different conditions and deal with different situations from the practice. I can learnto encourage myself when I succeed and not to be afraid of difficulties and failures.
Based on the above statements, I think that self-employing has more advantages. So I prefer to beself-employed.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Although students stay with their classmates all time in school, parents are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success. I disagree with the statement that classmates are a more importantinfluence on a child’s success in school, because of the reasons as follows.
First of all, parents are the people who understand their own children best. They know thechildren’s good sides and bad habits. They can correct the children’s bad idea and make them giverid of the bad habits. So children can found a good base to get success in school. But classmatescan not do these work.
The other reason is that parents have experiences on a lot of matters. If children have problems,parents can give them their experiences to help them solve problems. If parents have no similarexperiences, they still can give their children some advice and make them avoid the wrong
directions. Classmates can also give children some help, but they do not have more experiencesthan parents. So their influence is less than that of parents.
Parents also have other important influence on their children’s success in school. Parents mayanalyze something in different ways and have different opinions from children. Classmates alsocan have different opinions on one thing, but they are at the same conditions with each other,their opinions may be similar or narrow. Children can learn more comprehensive knowledge abouton thing from their parents.
So, based on the above discussion, I think it is clear that parents are a more important influencethan classmates on a child’s success in school.
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Most people are so busy that there is occasionally too much to do, so they must work on several projects at once. In fact, there are actually many advantages to working on two or more projects simultaneously as opposed merely to doing them one at a time.
Nowadays, there is simply not enough time to work exclusively on one project, so people must often take on two or more tasks together. Indeed, by doing several projects at once, a person can actually save time. For example, once I had to write an article for my school newspaper and study for a Chinese decided to do them both together, so I listened to my Chinese lessons on a CD while writing the did well on the test and submitted the article on time. Sometimes, one can save time by doing activities together and still do them well.
By working on several things at once, I find that I can focus more on the tasks at hand. This serves to enhance my performance, thereby letting me do work better and quicker. Last semester,I had to study for two tests and write a paper on the same was worried about all this work, so I concentrated solely on my turned off my cell phone, shut down my computer, and stayed in my room until I had completed all those tasks. Being focused exclusively on those projects enabled me to ignore the unimportant things and focus on what was crucial.
Lastly, while doing several things at once can be stressful, doing so successfully can be rewarding. By showing you are capable of multitasking, you can prove you skills and abilities to others. For instance, I volunteer at my school's library. The librarian once asked me to do two things simultaneously; catalog all the new books and complete a plan for a reading project for children. I managed to finish both jobs on time, which impressed the librarian so much that she recommended me for a summer job at the local library. Showing people you can do good work will always benefit you in the future. In conclusion, doing several projects at once can save time, enhance one's performance, and be rewarding in the benefits one receives. While multitasking might not be for everyone, I have found it to be an enjoyable and beneficial experience.
Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place wouldyou prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city, so I have experienced the good and badsides of both. I never thought that I would like living in a big city, but I was wrong. After ten yearsof living in one, I can't imagine ever living in a small town again.
Small towns and big cities both have some problems in terms of transportation. In a small town,you have to own a car to ensure a comfortable living. You can't get around without one becausethere isn't any kind of public transportation. Big cities generally have heavy traffic and expensiveparking, but there you have a choice of taking public transportation. It's not free, but it's oftencheaper than driving when you consider gas and time. Especially if you don't have a car, you'rebetter off in the city.
I love the excitement of big cities. Small towns have a slow pace. Large cities mean you have toadapt to a variety of situations, like finding a new route to work or trying a new restaurant. I enjoythat challenge very much. Another pan of the excitement of city living is the variety of culturalactivities available. There is a wide assortment of theatre, music and dance in big cities. These things are rare in small ones.
The final thing I like about large cities is the diversity of the people. The United States is made upof people of different races, religions, abilities, and interests. However, you seldom find such avariety of people in a smaller town. I think that living in an area where everyone was just like mewould quickly become boring.
Of course, security is a concern, and that's one area where small towns are superior to big , I would rather be a bit more cautious and live in a large city than to feel secure b
