剑桥14范文1
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Experiencing challenges and problems are part of life. There is nobody alive who has been spared hardship. When encountering a bad situation, I believe it is important to learn to accept it, such as an unpromising job or lack of money, and then try to make a difference in order to pursue a better life.
Instead of accepting the fact that bad things happen to everyone, most people struggle to distance themselves from dilemmas even though they cannot change what has happened. This resistance of reality only aggravates the pain. However, if people learned to face and embrace unhappiness or disappointment, they would realize that they are strong enough to withstand adversities. Rather than swimming against the tide, practicing going with the flow emerge a tougher and wiser person.
A troubling situation often presents people with perfect opportunities to learn a valuable life lesson. For instance, doing an unsatisfactory job or even getting laid off could motivate the person to upgrade his or her education or skills and learn to become a more valued employee so as to deliver better performance at work. Another example is that starting manage money is a sign of growing up for those who are in debt constantly. Without the ability of creating a budget or investing for the future, one’s life would be in chaos and collapse easily. Of course, there genuinely are extremely difficult and sad situations that all of us must face, such as the death of loved ones, but in most cases, things are less detrimental and dramatic than they seem and surviving difficulties provides perspective in our lives.
Overall, I believe happiness is a choice which relies on how to respond to a negative situation.
批改如下：
整体文章水平不错，高中词汇使用比例大，但结构清晰
中间有少数语法和词汇使用问题
最后成文：
Some people think that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try to improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Experiencing challenges and problems are a part of life. There is nobody alive who has been spared hardship. When encountering a terrible situation, I believe it is important to learn to accept it, such as an unpromising job or lack of money, and then try to make a difference in order to pursue a better life.
Instead of accepting that bad things happen to everyone, most people struggle to distance themselves from dilemmas even though they cannot change what has happened. This resistance of reality only aggravates the pain. However, if people learned to face and embrace unhappiness or disappointment, they would realize that they are tough enough to withstand adversities. Rather than swimming against the tide, practicing going with the flow emerge a tougher and wiser person.
A troubling situation often presents people with perfect opportunities to learn a valuable life lesson. For instance, doing an unsatisfactory job or even getting laid off could motivate the person to upgrade his or her education or skills and learn how to become a more valued employee so as to deliver better performance at work. Another example is that starting to manage money is a sign of growing up for those who are in debt constantly. Without the ability of creating a budget or investing for the future, one’s life would be in chaos and collapse easily. Of course, there genuinely are extremely difficult and sad situations that all of us must face, such as the death of loved ones, but in most cases, things are less detrimental and dramatic than they seem and surviving difficulties provide perspective in our lives.
Overall, I believe happiness is a choice which relies on how to react to a negative situation.
剑桥14范文2
To simplify or reduce one's expectations or commitments, especially in work hours
2) contractually
Of, relating to, or having the nature of a contract 依据合同地
3) statutory
prescribed or authorized by statute 法定的
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其实并不建议考鸭在自己的作文中做这样的概述，因为它耗时间，对语言能力要求高（语义和主体段内容相同，但是必须避免表达重复），而且非必要。
英语好？请随意。
上文中responsibility, pressure and long hours是heavy burdens对应的具体内容。好的作文，要具体，要在需要的地方具体。
黑体部分，是举例。
黑体部分，是举例。
黑体部分，是举例。
欢迎报名邵教授的写作课：
剑桥14范文3
1. 作为雅思官方给出的范文，这篇文章肯定不存在任何语法错误。
2. 这篇文章使用了各种各样的复杂句，从开头算起，出现了：宾语从句，时间状语从句，让步状语从句，whether引导的主语从句，限定性定语从句，条件状语从句等。
本题中的饼图说明了美国人在日常的几餐中(早、中、晚、零食)对三类营养物质——钠、饱和脂肪、摄入的糖—一的平均摄入量。
首先,我们来看每个饼图中的早餐和午餐部分。这三类营养物质(在每餐中)的摄入比例似乎差不多。早餐中有14%的钠、16%的饱和脂肪、及16%的摄入的糖,而午餐中这三类的比例分别是29%、26%和19%。
接下来再看另外两餐,我们可以很清楚地看到它们的差別较大。晚餐中三类物质的比例从43%到23%不等,而零食中的含量正好相反,从14%至42%不等。总之,从以上图中可以看出,晚餐是吃得最不健康的,零食紧随其后。而早餐是吃得最健康的,午餐居中。
剑桥雅思14test1小作文以及参考范文就介绍完了，大家在看参考的作文的时候不能只背，需要了解该作文的逻辑、写作思路，以及一些好句子、好语法，这样才能实打实的帮助你提高雅思作文水平、
attempt n. 尝试
rare or dying species 稀少或者正在灭绝的动物
breeding programmes 繁殖项目
genuine sadness 真实的悲伤
ruthlessly adv. 无情地，冷酷地
poaching n. 偷猎
debatable adj. 有争议的。
excessive adj. 过度的。
call for 呼吁
urgent action 立刻行动
halt v. 暂停，停止
reverse v. 扭转
discard v. 丢弃，抛弃
gruesome adj. 恐怖的，可怕的
ingest v. 摄入
food chain n. 食物链
cause for regret 后悔的原因
Some people consider that the loss of individual species of plants and animals is the main environmental problem of our time. Attempts to preserve rare or dying species are carried out in zoos or other specialist plant and animal facilities, through breeding programmes, preservation orders and other forms of protection and there was genuine sadness among many when the last surviving white rhino died earlier this year.
Survival of the fittest is nature’s way of ruthlessly allowing weaker specimens to die out, although mankind has also contributed to falling animal numbers through hunting and poaching. However, whether saving individual species should be the main focus of environmental protection is debatable. Climate change and excessive use of plastic are just two other major problems that deserve our attention.
The evidence of climate change is there for us all to see: rising sea levels and associated flooding with the loss of homes at low land levels are becoming more frequent. Many countries and island communities are now calling for urgent action to delay, halt or even reverse the process, although if we believe the experts, reversal is impossible. Habitable areas are gradually shrinking, often for some of the poorest groups of people but there seems to be little obvious action taking place. If the major contributors to climate change will not support the reduction of greenhouse gases, there is little hope for the future.
Naturalists have also begun to expose the serious problem arising from discarded plastic waste. Birds and animals can die gruesome deaths through being trapped or caught up in plastic bags or ropes, while the long process required for these plastics to decay means that they remain a threat for many years to come. Worse, there is now beginning to be evidence of sea creatures ingesting smaller globules of disintegrating plastic, which harms them and all the other creatures in their particular food chain.
The loss of particular species, both flora and fauna, is cause for regret, but I do not agree that they are the most important environmental problems these days. If climate change and damage from plastic continue, there will be less land and less food for everyone including plants and animals.
