雅思范文赏析1
Task：Some people think parents should read or tell stories to children, while others think parents need not do that, as children can read books, watch TV or movies by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
思路解析：
1. 给孩子讲故事好处多多。第一，这能巩固家庭纽带。举例，在讲故事的过程中，父母和孩子都会完全把注意力放到对方身上，进行深度的感情交流，这培养了他们之间的信任和相互关爱。
2. 第二，在听故事的过程中，孩子们的记忆力，语言能力，词汇量，以及把抽象信息视觉化的思维都会得到锻炼和提升，这对于他们今后的学术教育十分有用，比如说他们能在课堂上及时抓住老师讲课的要点。
3. 当然，孩子自由阅读或是观看电视也是必要的。举例，在独立阅读的过程中，他们需要进行独立的思考和判断，这让他们变得思维成熟，而且自由阅读各个领域的书籍也是一个实现自我认知的过程，让他们找到自己擅长的，感兴趣的专业方向。
参考范文：
It has been rightly said that ‘There have been great societies that did not use the wheel, but there have been no societies that did not tell stories.’ The question of debate is whether parents should read or tell stories to children or whether children should come to know about stories themselves by reading books or by watching TV or movies. In this essay I intend to discuss both views followed by my opinion.
There are many benefits of reading bedtime stories to children. First of all, it encourages family bonding. In this day and age of hectic lives and busy schedules, reading together is a simple and enjoyable way for parents to take time out and focus on the family. Children also feel wanted and loved. What is more, it moulds children into becoming readers, and this significantly increases the child’s potential for academic success as well as lifelong success in general. It also helps children master language development as by listening to stories, children learn pronunciation and vocabulary. It also builds listening skills, increases a child’s attention span, and develops the ability to concentrate. It develops children’s ability to express themselves more confidently, easily, and clearly in spoken and written terms. It develops and fosters a child’s natural curiosity.
Furthermore, it develops creativity and a child’s ability to use his own imagination. It expands children’s horizons by exposing them to new situations, and teaches them appropriate behavior. Reading children’s stories to children provides the best opportunities for true teaching moments as most of these stories have morals. Reading picture books develops a young child’s appreciation for the arts through exposure to many different styles of art and illustrations.
On the other hand, some opine that children should themselves read stories from books or watch them on TV and in movies. When reading books and news on TV by themselves rather than by depending on parents, children have the freedom of making decisions and judgments, thus sharpening the ability of independent thinking. What is more, it is mainly freely reading books, magazines and TV programs in a diversity of subjects, from science to arts to sports that builds up the self-discovery for children, for example, figuring out what subjects and future careers might be suitable for their potentials, talents and interests.
This would be much easier for the parents who are too busy nowadays, but then all the above benefits would not ensue. What is more, parents can start telling stories to children much before children can themselves read. Watching TV does not help the child to develop imagination and this may be detrimental in the long run. Moreover, it would be difficult to monitor what children are actually learning.
To sum up, I believe that, it is always better for the parents as well as the children, if parents read aloud to their children. This would give them quality time together and loads of other benefits which I have discussed above. I pen off with a famous quote of Robert Mackee “Stories are the creative conversion of life itself into a more powerful, clearer, more meaningful experience. They are the currency of human contact.”
雅思范文赏析2
雅思写作题目：
The subjects and lesson contents are decided by the authorities such as the government. Some people argue that teachers should make the choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
雅思写作范文：
It has long been argued amid the community: Which one counts more, authority or academy? Notwithstanding the fact that our current pedagogy is so much clinging to the central committee, the educational system is in a blockbuster amount of outcry for reform. Does the temporary system still embrace rationality? Or is it the ripe juncture to refurnish it out and out? I personally took a deep look in it.
In the showdown between authority and academy, the former arguably outweighs the latter. Politics is a compulsory course in all kinds of enrollment examinations as well as all levels of educational institutions. The government, or a commander-in-chief to be vivid, needs to be held accountable for the stability of society. Education is by all means an almighty tool to incubate a behaving generation. With social development gaining momentum, a farsighted power base generally with a broader scope than the individuals, needs to build up particular majors specializing in fledgling domains involving cleaning energy, high-tech innovation, interpretation, to name but a few. Trained personnel in such fields are usually more fit into the society.
Arguments being articulated above though, academy-oriented teaching methodology is so far still reputed for its own merits. With teachers gaining more says in selecting knowledge, the students will presumably be inculcated with a more objective perception of the curriculum. Without authority barging in, the possibility of the impartiality being jeopardized is excluded for the mission of serving the regime is no longer valid. Only under such circumstance can the intrinsic value of the subject be authentically and manifested to the thirsty learners in an untangled manner. An untarnished and pristine academic ambience is colossally demanding by numerous pundits for the sake of equity and truth.
To sum up, there's no such inception that is appropriate to be dubbed ^v^sheerly right^v^ or ^v^starkly wrong^v^ . The righteous one solely lies in the rationality of adapting it. Authority, in China's case, can never be an outlier standing by the side of academic circle owing to its unique national condition.
雅思范文赏析3
In contemporary society, most families are capable to afford home appliances such as television, microwave, oven and so on. It is generally accepted that those technological goods have brought great convenience to our life although they do generate negative effects on environment.
In terms of merits of using domestic appliances, the most obvious is that people’s quality of life has been boosted. Take TV as an example; watching TV is a preferable means of relaxation for people to spend their leisure time and release stress, with amusing programs, entertainment news as well as soap operas shown on the screen. Another case is that the application of microwave, oven and rock cookers in the kitchen saves housewives from heavy housework and even assists them in cooking delicious meals efficiently. Furthermore, consumers’ demands for electric appliances stimulate the development of manufacturing industries, which creates more job opportunities and bring the government increasing tax revenue.
However, it must be admitted that the worldwide use of household appliances inevitably contributes to environmental degradation. To commence with, in an attempt to maintain these devices function, a great amount of electricity has to be consumed, which is largely generated from fossil fuels such as coal and petroleum. In the long run, the scarcity of natural resources will become a tough issue for human beings. In addition, harmful gas emission is another big concern. As a matter of fact, in the use of fridge and air conditions, Freon (a kind of chemical gas) is emitted into air, leading to the destruction of ozone layer.
In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, it is a positive development that people can purchase various electric appliances. However, environment-friendly technology should be adopted in its production to protect environment.
雅思范文赏析4
开头段：引出话题+表明立场
In pursuit of higher academic ambition or better career prospects, a growing number of people study and work abroad instead of staying in their working in own countries avoids their adaption to new environment and costly tuition fee and living cost, I strongly claim that studying or working abroad paves the way for their career prospects and develops their independence in long run.
主体段1- 解释为什么留在国内是一个好选择
Advocates of staying in hometown believe that there is no need to encounter culture shock and sticking to culture they have immersed and familiar language is easy for them to adapt to college life and working environment. Another merit of the proximity to students’ hometown can always keep the homesickness away and familiar surrounding guarantees a sense of security and belongings, with a positive attitude promoting their academic output. More importantly, staying locally might be a good choice for those family who struggle with poverty, because tuition fees and living cost including housing and groceries cost a fortune, which in turn deepens their financial pressure.
（斜体横线为高分句型，可以参考）
主体段2-解释为什么国外学习和工作是一个好选择- 原因1
However, after-effects of studying abroad are innumerable, high and have lots of benefits for students’ future development. Initially, exposure to a brand-new environment from overseas improves a self-sufficient attitude and helps students an independent lifestyle. When getting educated in a foreign country, they have to stretch their comfort zone and are responsible for cooking, cleaning and paying bills. Independent skills to manage its own finances is also strengthened. Regardless of any abroad program like scholarship, grant or personal source of income, the students get lots of opportunities to maintain and handle their own finances.
主体段3-解释为什么国外学习和工作是一个好选择- 原因2
What’s more, studying and working abroad is a precious opportunity to enlarge their vision and have a in-depth understanding of the institutions typically offer cutting-edge knowledge, hire topmost successful scholars as guest lecturers, and supply good laboratories with world-class facilities which provide a good atmosphere for doing research. Meanwhile, good exposure to multicultural people can change the way they see the world and enhance their tolerance to cultural conflicts, which impacts a good change in their mindset.
结尾段：总结全文+表达自己观点
In conclusion, it is inevitable that people benefit a lot from studying and working from overseas in long term, and I consider this adventurous experience as a better choice but at the expense of sufficient financial support and staying away from familiar surroundings.
最后，我们需要积累一些话题素材，高分词汇和表达帮助提升Lexicial Resource（此评分标准如果7要求a sufficient range of vocabulary大量词汇+less common lexical items 高分表达包括固定搭配+less errors尽量少出错误 ）
雅思范文赏析5
Task：In some countries, Young people are not only richer but also safer and healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. Reasons and solutions.
思路解析：
1. 第一个理由是，年轻人们生长在一个物质充沛的时代，他们早就习惯一种安逸的，便利的生活，所以他们对于生活水平的进步并不敏感。此外，年轻人都野心勃勃地追求金钱名利，这让他们每天都挣扎在工作压力和加班之中，这自然降低了它们的幸福感。
2. 第二，很多年轻人从小就被父母溺爱，他们变得自私，无同情心。他们只关心自己的利益，而缺乏仁爱之心去帮助他人。结果是，他们也无法获得的他人关爱，并每天都感觉到被隔离和孤独。
3. 解决之道需要年轻人改变自己。举例，他们不应该成为追求名利的工作狂，而应该把更多的时间和注意力放到家庭之中，这能恢复一种工作和生活的平衡。此外，主动参加聚会和集体体育运动，这些和他人的互动能恢复他们的活力，积极的生活态度，以及好的情绪。
参考范文：
Nowadays, with the development of technology and economy, living conditions of youngster have been improved substantially. However, it is surprising that the level of their happiness does not grow correspondingly. In this essay, I will give possible reasons and solutions to this issue.
Firstly, as the young generation grow up and live in a time when there is much more abundant materials, they take for granted their high living standard and become less sensitive to any improvement in this regard. On the other hand, their spiritual need cannot satisfy due to the loss of traditional values. They strive for fame and profit and suffer from high stress every day, but get disoriented in a fast-changing world and have no idea about the ultimate goal of their lives.
In addition, as many young people were spoilt by their parents in their childhood, they become self-centered, inconsiderate and apathetic. All they care about is no more than their personal interests and feelings, instead of having a charitable heart for giving and helping others. Therefore, love and care, the key elements connecting people together emotionally, are fading. Therefore, young people gradually become indifferent from their friends and families, which then trapping them into negative emotions like loneliness, depression and anxiety.
To address this problem, young people should realize that the main solution lies with their own change. They should shift their attention from the pursuit of fame and money to their families and a balanced life. Also, engaging in interpersonal activities like parties and sports with friends is an idea way that helping young generations recover their emotional pleasure and well-being back, because sharing true feelings, experience and inner-heart ideas with others is a wonderful means of relieving stress, mentally.
雅思范文赏析6
Task：A family has a great influence on children's development, but the outside of home plays a bigger part in children's life. Do you agree or disagree?
思路解析：
1. 首先，家庭造成的影响不可小觑。毕竟父母是孩子生命当中的第一个老师，每天陪伴孩子们最长时间。举例，他们直接教会孩子们基本的生存技能，如语言，做饭，收拾屋子，卫生习惯，以及基本的学术能力，如数学计算，阅读，思考和判断。
2. 然而，其他因素同样有影响力。举例，在孩子们的学术教育上，学校的老师影响是第一位的。他们是学生教育的领路人，教会他们各个学科的基础知识，学习方式，以及培养他们对于某些学科的热爱。
3. 媒体同样对孩子们的影响很大。举例，电视和电影镜头中的暴力内容会扭曲孩子们的价值观，让他们变得富有侵略性，产生对于暴力的崇拜，并且错误地认为采用暴力手段解决问题是合适的。
参考范文：
The development of children depends on many factors, including parents, school education, media, peers and so forth. Personally, I agree that the family is less influential than other aspects working together, and my reasons would be explored as below.
Admittedly, the influence of family on children is very deep, because parents, primary teachers in the life of children, set the first role models for them to learn and imitate, and which would be logged into the impressionable childhood mind and determine basic behaviors and thinking of them. For example, by observing and learning the daily activities of parents, like speaking, cooking and house cleaning, washing hands before eating, a child can master the language, self-care ability and hygienic habits. Besides, parents also play a key role in developing the intelligence of children. For instance, with day-to-day teaching, communication and storytelling, a parent can help a child to improve cognitive skills like basic mathematic calculation, memorizing, reading, and thinking and judging in a proper way.
However, I strongly believe outside-of-home elements make greater contributions to the overall growth of children. Firstly, in terms of academic education, teachers in school have priority over parents. For example, compared with some parent who have low-level or even no education, teachers are professionally educated and trained in formal university, and well-experienced in teaching. That is to say, school teachers are more advantageous and influential, in terms of comprehensively and accurately instructing, explaining and demonstrating common knowledge about laws of nature and universe, theories and formulas of math and physics, and events and people in history. What is more, forming social skills also relies on a school environment where children have opportunities to communicate, play and argue with other peers. This strong interpersonal interaction can make children proficient in real-world socialization.
Besides, mass media is another external factor affecting children’s development. For example, violent video on the Internet, TV programs and computer games are very likely to twist social values of the young audience, because children, unlike adults, are lack of abilities to distinguish right from wrong. Therefore, with long-term exposure to ill information, children would be rude, aggressive and self eccentric. As a result, they, more often than not, consider violence as the main or even only way to solve problems, thereby leading to school bullying.
In conclusion, when it comes to the importance in influencing children, other aspects like teachers in school and media override the parents, for the reasons that the formers have incomparable effects on the education, social skills and personalities of children.
雅思范文赏析7
Some people think it is a better way to go abroad to work or study, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.（20_/5/7大陆真题）
题目大意：
一些人认为出国学习和工作是一个好选择，然后另一些认为呆在自己的国家是一个不错的选择，讨论双方观点并给予自己的观点。
题型： 讨论题
话题： 教育类
