商务信函范文英文模板询盘1
可以针对首次来信没有明确需求，联系信息不全的客户
Dear Mr. Amir,
Many thanks for your inquiry dated(of) ____ from .
In order to let us make more correct quotation accordingly, please kindly tell us the e_act model number you prefer after checking our website of .
Besides, to help us offer the best price, please also introduce your company as many details as you can. Such as your company foundation time, how many workers, major product lines, company website and last year's sales turnover if possible. More details better price.
Waiting for your early reply.
Best Regards
Amy
可以针对首次询盘比较明确，且联系信息较全的客户。
Dear Mr. Naresh,
So glad receiving your enquiry for our Barbies' collection from dated ___. Thanks a lot.
We are a leading manufacturer in children’s wear in China and our products have been e_ported to customers all over the world such as ____. The Barbies Collection is the most popular style in our factory, selling fast.
However, detailed price list for the skirts and long pants will be sent to you based on your specific further product description such as color, specification, special design requirement etc. Please check the following styles photo which should be suitable for your Indian market and tell us more requirements on the e_act skirts and long pants.
Please do not hesitate to contact us if any question and we are waiting for your reply.
Best regards,
Amy
商务信函范文英文模板询盘2
Dear Mr. XXX,
We learn from ABC Co. ltd., New York that you are a leading exporter in your country. We are, at present, very much interested in importing your goods and would appreciate your sending us catalogue, sample books or even samples if possible.
Please give us detailed information on CIF Guangzhou prices, discounts, and terms of payment.
Should there be any items new to the . market, kindly let us know and send samples if available.
We hope this will be a good start for a long and profitable business relation, and we assure you of our close attention to your offers.
Sincerely,
商务信函范文英文模板询盘3
【发函】发挥自己想象，写一封和外国公司建立业务关系的函电，要求：
1.说明从何渠道得知对方公司名称和信息
2.对自己的公司做简单介绍
3.表示希望和对方建立业务关系
Dear Sirs
We have your name and address from the Commercial Counselor’s Office of the Japan Embassy in China. We have the pleasure of write this letter to you in the hope of establishing business relations with you.
To give you a general introduce of our company. Our company is one of the leading importers of mobile phones and enjoy a wide range of communication field .We have many years’ experience in this particular line of business and have concluded some satisfactory business all over the world.
商务信函范文英文模板询盘4
商务写作
(Business Writing)
一、商务信函概述
? 一、正确的观念
? 1.商务信函是一种“推销”函
? 商务信函是一种常用的商业联系媒介，实际上商务信函是一种“推销”函，写信人总是在推销着什么，或是物品、或是服务等。 要写好商务信函不仅要具备相关的业务知识，掌握好法规和条款等，还应具备扎实的语言基础，熟悉信函的书写形式和行文要求。 2.商务信函的基本特点 商务信函书写的重点应放在“效率”上，应易读易懂；语气真诚、友好、客气；语言简短、朴实、自然；内容清晰、准确、具体；行文正确、完整。 3.商务信函无定律 好的信函并没有固定不变的写作模式，因人而异。写信时，应充分考虑收信方的观
点和看法、背景和所处环境。
二、应用原则
? 1.“挨达”AIDA原则：在拟就一封商务信函时，应首先考虑的原则： A— Attention 注意 I— Interest 兴趣 D— Desire 意愿 A— Action行动 个“C”的行文原则 明晰Clearness 具体Concreteness 简洁Conciseness 诚意Conscientiousness 正确Correctness 个性Character 礼貌Courtesy 完整Completeness 体谅Considerateness 优美Concinnity
三、商务信函的构成要素
? 1.信头（Letterhead）
? 是指发信人所在公司的名称和地址，通常是预先印制好的，一般位于信纸的正上方。 ?
? 内容包括：电话号码、电报挂号（Cable Address）、传真（Fax）和电传（Telex）号码、信件编号或索引号码以及写信日期。 例如： 英国—— date/month/year 27 February,20_ 美国—— month/date/year February 27,20_ 2.信内地址（Inside Address） 即收信人的姓名和地址，通常是在日期下面隔两行，位于书信正文的左上方。 3.称呼（Salutation） 是发信人对收信人的称号用语，自成一行，位于“信内地址”左下方的一、二行处。 商务书信的称呼通常要注意下面几点： （1）Dear Sirs 和 Gentlemen是最常使用的公文用语，前者是英国式的称呼，后者
是美国式的称呼；注意Sirs前通常加Dear；Gentlemen必须用复数；
? （3）Dear Sir是指男性，Dear Madam是指女性，Dear Sir or Madam是指不知道对方性别。 （4）称呼后面用冒号或逗号均可，一般用冒号。 4.正文 正式的商务信件在每一段之间均留一空行。每一行末尾的单词一般不移行。 5.结尾客套语 位于正文最后一行下面一、二行处，从信纸中间偏右的地方开始写，一般占一行，第一个字母要大写，结尾用逗号。 6.签名 是指发信人、书信执笔人或公司代表在书信上签上公司名称或个人名字，通常位于
结尾客套语下面两行，从中间偏右处开始写，一般占3～4行：第一行写公司名称，第二行是个人签名，要用钢笔；第三行打印自己的名字，用于辨认和复信；第四行打印所属部门的名称及签名人的职称。
? 信封和书信的写法-The Style of Envelope and Letter 1.信封的写法 （1）美国式航空信封的写法（Stamp） ABC Manufacturing Company(收信人地址) 150 Giera Court Parlin, Livingstone New Jersey 08859, USAMr. Black Smith(收信人名字和职称)President of the Company Beijing Import and Export Company 86 Baiyilu,Haidian District 100872 Beijing,PRC (发信人地址) （2）英国式航空信封的写法（Stamp） Beijing Import and Export Company(收信人地址) 86 Baiyilu,Haidian District 100872 Beijing,PRC AFTER 15 DAYS PLEASE RETURN TO(发信人地址) SMITH & SON, LTD 15 WOOD STREET LONDON 6 ENGLAND 商务写作的十大技巧 1.了解读者 2.使用第二人称，强调读者的利益 3.确定单一的交流目标和目的 4.清晰、简洁、直白 5.使用主题行、缩格、简短的开头段落和附言 6.开篇和结尾有力 7.在长文件中应用标题、空白、图表
? 9.避免消极写作 10.应用说服的技巧来影响读者 商务写作目标 商务写作通常是为了完成以下任务： 通知 说服 指导 记录 商务信函举例1： 亲爱的思拜格女士： 我公司致力于为您提供高效的服务。我们拥有大量的专家和技术人员、充足
的资源，能够为您设计一流的健身中心。这将有助于贵公司提高劳动生产率，降低缺勤率，而且我们收费很低。
? 请您仔细考虑，选择我公司将会有如下收益：劳动生产率提高，员工士气高涨，缺勤现象减少，还有选择一流的供应商所带来的种种好处。 当您正考虑如何才能找到一家最好的公司，它将为您的公司提供上述益处时，我相信您一定会马上与我们联系，尽快开始改善贵公司的工作环境，提高公司业绩。 商务信函举例2： 收信人：Great Valley 人事部 发信人：质量提高小组 主题：停车场照明问题 日期：20_/6/20 今年夏天要在停车场的边缘增设照明灯，计划在停车场内端增设五盏，左右两边各增设三盏，共计11盏。 这些照明灯将创造一个更安全的环境，如有问题，请与质量小组的成员联系。祝愉快！ 商务信函举例3： 亲爱的阿兰： 作为会议中心的主席，我现在写信通知你有关我方机 构的重大变化，相信会对彼此业务关系产生影响。 普林斯顿会议中心拥有291间客房，在过去的两年里， 我们的定房率、营业收入和利润都在不断提高。根据业 内年度统计资料，我们每间客房的盈利率已经进入全美 城郊旅店的前十位。我们的业绩和有效管理使公司在几 年内获得了数项大奖，包括：Pinnacle奖，AAA四星 奖。 我们希望增强与您的业务联系。我们感谢过去几年里 您的惠顾，并致力在未来为您提供超乎您想象的服务。 我们将保持优良的传统，更好与贵协会合作。 我们将很快与您电话联系，与您磋商最近的会议筹备 工作。如果您有紧急需要，请打电话通知我们。很荣幸 与您继续业务往来。 商务信函格式
? 1.缩行式（Indented Style） 缩行式将封内地址、其他需要分行的地方的后行比前行往右缩进二至三个英文字母，各行以右斜方式排列。 各段的起始字缩入四至五个英文字母。 结尾客套语和签名置于中间偏右下方。
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
Mrs. R. G. Cole
Manager
Mabels Pty Ltd
Canterbury 8633
Dear Madam,
We must remind you …
Yours faithfully
J. Turner
Production Manager
? 2.半平头式（Semi-block Style）
? 日期、客套语和签名一般从信纸中部写起
? 正文的每个段落的第一行往后缩入二至五个字母
? 封内地址、称呼与左边看齐
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
? Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
? Mrs. R. G. Cole
? Manager
? Mabels Pty Ltd Canterbury 8633 Dear Madam, We must remind you … Yours faithfullyJ. TurnerProduction Manager 3.平头式（Block Style） 平头式除信头、日期、客套语和签名外，其他部分每行开头都与左边边缘看齐。
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
Mrs. R. G. Cole
Manager
Mabels Pty Ltd
Canterbury 8633
Dear Madam,
We must remind you …
Yours faithfully
J. Turner
Production Manager
? 4.完全平头式（Complete Block Style）
? 信纸中的各部分内容全部都与左边边缘齐平，从上到下一直线，段落间采用双行排
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
Mrs. R. G. Cole
Manager
Mabels Pty Ltd
Canterbury 8633
Dear Madam,
We must remind you …
商务信函范文英文模板询盘5
Dear Mr/Ms,
I represent the W/P Electronics Company in Dallas, and will be in Kunming from next Monday to Friday, (October 5-9). I should like to call on you to discuss our new monitor. Would 0930 hours on Tuesday, October 6 be convenient?
I shall be in Beijing, at the Great Wall Hotel, from Tuesday, September 29, until Sunday, October 4, where a message will reach me. If the day is not convenient, will you please suggest another.
Yours faithfully
尊敬的先生/小姐
我是达拉斯W/P电子公司的代表,将于下周一到周五(10月5-9日)住留昆明。我乐于请您商讨我们新的显示器。星期二即10月6日上午09:30是否方便?
从周二,即9月29日,我将住在北京的长城宾馆,直到周六,即10月4日,在那会有通知给我。如商讨日期不方便,请另外建议。
商务信函范文英文模板询盘6
Dear Mr. Sation
With reference to your letter dated 3rd May 20_, I am writing to apologies for the mistake we made.
The mistake was made because our computer broke down on 29 April. I can assure you we will send the cheque of $200 to you in two days. We will offer you 20% discount for you next stay.
Please accept our apologies for the inconvenience this error has caused you and we look forward to meeting you again.
Your sincerely
商务信函范文英文模板询盘7
Dear Mr. XXX,
You are recommended to us by Bank of China in New York that you are one of the leading sportswear dealers. Right now, we are particularly interested in importing various ranges of sportswear.
We are large dealers in textiles here and believe there is a promising market in our area for moderately priced sportswear.
It would be helpful if you could send us your latest catalogue and price list. If the quality of the goods comes up to our expectation and the delivery date is acceptable, we can probably let you have regular orders.
We are looking forward to your earliest reply.
Sincerely,
商务信函范文英文模板询盘8
一、称谓
1、Dear All, Dear Sir, Dear Madam, Dear Sir or Madam
2、DearMr. /Mrs./Miss./Ms.+姓
3、Dear+职位/头衔+姓
Dear
4、名字的写法
两个字姓名拼音首字母都大写 Wang Qian
三个字，姓的拼音首字母大写，名字第一个字拼音大写，不空格跟第二个字拼音，无需大写 Wang Xiaoqian
二、谦称
1、YoursTruly，Yours Faithfully，YoursSincerely
2、Yours，BestWishes
三、日期表达
1、美式：月，日，年 July 8, 20_
2、英式：日，月，年 8th July，20_
四、附件
如果信中有附件，应在左下角（谦称之下）注明Encl.或Enc.
举例：
Encl. the relevant information of P84
Enc. the relevant information of P84
商务信函范文英文模板询盘9
Dear Mr. Steve,
Congratulations on your 50th birthday. This is a special and important day for you and we would like to express our sincerest greetings.
To achieve better performance, we will pull together and help each other sincerely as usual.
With affectionate birthday wishes.
Yours faithfully,
K&W Company
尊敬的史蒂夫先生：
祝您50岁生日快乐！对您来说，今天是一个特殊而又重要的日子，在这个特别的时刻，我们想献上我们最真诚的祝福。
为取得更好的业绩，我们会如往常一样齐心合力，真诚互助。
送上美好的生日祝福。
K&W公司员工
商务信函范文英文模板询盘10
Dear ___,
we have got your order of......
The bag you order is one of the hot items from my store and it is made of high quality leather. But the order seems unpaid. If there's anything I can help with the price or size etc.
When the payment is finish, I can stock up the item and get it ready for shipping.
If any further questions, please feel free to contact with us.
Thanks
Best Regards
已付款订单的回复：
Dear ___,
I am very glad to hear from you. The biggest size we have is 39. And this shoes is little bigger in size. So I think 39 will fit.
If you have any other questions, Please feel free let me know.
We are looking forward to getting your early reply.
Best Regards
客户投诉产品质量有问题
Dear customer,
I received the boots but I can't sell them because the Gucci bo_ was ripped up if you can't secure the packages better than that then you will not be hearing from me again!
Dear friend,
I am very sorry to hear that. The damage must happened during transportation. I usually make sure everything is in good condition before shipping products out. I make sure giving you more discounts to make up when you buy from me ne_t time. Thanks for your understanding.
Best Regards
订单完成
Dear customer,
I am very happy to see that you have received the items. Thanks for your support. I hope you satisfy with the item and looking forward to do more business in the future with you.
Thanks
Best Regards
商务信函范文英文模板询盘11
Dear Sir,
We are interested in buying large quantities of steel screws in all sizes.
We would be obliged if you would give us a quotation per kilogram C&F Liverpool, England. It would also be appreciated if you could forward samples and your price-list to us.
We used to purchase these products from other sources. We may now prefer to buy from your company because we understand that you are able to supply larger quantities at more attractive prices. In addition, we have confidence in the quality of your products.
We look forward to hearing from you by return E-mail.
Sincerely,
Xxx
