商务函电下订单范文1
Dear Mr. Fang
Thank you for your order for cotton twill fabrics.
The goods are now under production and will be delivered on time.
It is a pleasure to have the opportunity of supplying you and we hope you will be satisfied with the quality of our goods. On receiving your credit from the bank，we will make up your order.
We will have the pleasure of receiving further orders from you.
Yours sincerely,
Sales Manager
接受订单信函英文范文【翻译】
方先生：
多谢贵公司订购全棉斜布(订货单5)。
现有关货品正在生产中，我方会按贵公司订单要求的日期交货。
我们为能有机会向贵方供应产品而深感幸甚，希望贵公司会对我方产品的 质量感到满意。一旦收到贵公司开立的信用证，我们会立即安排装货。
期望日后继续收到贵公司的订单。
您忠实的
营业部经理
接受订单信函英文范文的两个要点：
一、信函原则
礼貌原则(Courtesy)
礼貌不仅仅是指有礼，也不是简单用一些礼貌用语，比如“your kind inquiry your esteemed order就可以，它是从您为重(You-attitude)的角度来考虑问题的。为了使商务英语文书更具礼节，撰写者还应避免过激、冒犯和轻视的用词。
2.体谅原则(Consideration)
体谅原则强调对方的情况而非我方情况，要体现一种为他人考虑、多体谅对方 心情和处境的态度。当撰写商务英语文书时，要将对方的要求、需要、渴望和感情记 在心中，寻找最好的方式将信息传递给对方。
二、语言点
in a position to 能够
not in a position/ in no position to do sth.不會泛做某事
in a good position to do sth.很有能力做某事，完全能做某事
in a difficult position to do sth.很难做某事
例如：We are in a good position to meet your requirements.
(我们完全可以满足你方的需求。)
上而这句话更好地体现了为他人考虑的态度。
商务函电下订单范文2
要求按现金提货方式装运订货
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for your order dated 28 April for 40 widgets. We would like to arrange for immediate shipment. Unfortunately, we do not have sufficient credit information to offer you open account terms at this time. Would it be acceptable to ship this order cash on delivery?
If you wish to receive open account terms for your next order, please provide us with the standard financial statement and bank reference. This information will be held in the strictest confidence.
We look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
延迟付款
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for your letter dated 24 March. We are very sorry to hear about your company’s current financial problems.
We have considered your request to delay payment of your outstanding balance of US$ until 1 May of this year. We are happy to tell you that we can agree to your proposal.
We must add, however, that this preferential treatment is being given only because of your current circumstances. It cannot be taken as a precedent for our future commercial relationship.
We wish you better times ahead.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
确认供货
Dear Sir or Madam:
As a result of our recent exchange of information, we have a strong interest to work with your proposal.
Please see the following terms and conditions as a confirmation of the start of our business relationship.
Product Name:
Spec. Number:
Quantity:
Price:
Packing:
Payment:
We hope that this first transaction will come to a successful conclusion for both of us. We look forward to continuing a mutually beneficial trade between our companies.
Yours faithfully,
Hillary
商务函电下订单范文3
回复 询盘 告知无货
Referring to your letter of 5 June, we very much regret that we are unable to make you an offer for the goods you demand. The reason is that the product you need has been out of stock. What’s more our manufacturers have declined orders because of shortage of raw materials.
We shall, however, file your inquiry and cable you our offers as soon as we have got supplies.
我方收到贵公司6月5日来函，但非常遗憾，我方无法对贵方所需产品报盘。其原因是，此货品在我处已经脱销。而且，由于原料短缺，生产厂家已经拒绝了我方订单。
我方已将贵方询函备案，一经有货，我方将以电报报盘。
回复 询盘 ，量大折价
We are pleased to receive your letter of 5 July and enclose our catalogue and price list. Also by separate post we are sending you the samples of our products. Our catalogue contains items and their specifications of our supplies. Through comparing our prices with those of other suppliers, you will appreciate the moderate prices of ours. For a total purchase of not less than 100,000 and not more than 200,000 American dollars, we would allow a discount of 10% and for a purchase larger than 200,000 American dollars, we would allow a 20% special discount.
很高兴收到贵公司7月5日来函。现寄上产品目录与价目表。同时另封寄去样品，请查收。
所寄产品目录包括本公司产品的品名、规格。与其他厂商的价格比较，我方的报价定会使贵方满意。
凡总定购量超过100,000美元但不足200,000美元者，我方将给予10%的折扣;凡总定购量超过200,000美元者，我方将给予20%的折扣。
如何追问买方意见
In reply to your inquiry we sent you on May 25 a copy of illustrated catalog of our electric products. As we have not heard from you since, we would like to ask whether you have had received our reply and what opinion you have on our products. We are always ready to serve you and should be grateful for your reply.
在5月25日我方对贵方询函的回函中，已寄去本公司电器产品的附图目录。因迄今尚未接到贵方的消息，特致函询问，贵方是否已收到我方回函，并征求贵方对本公司产品的意见。我方随时愿意效劳，若承蒙贵方惠赐回函，当不胜感激。
如何询问参展条件
From yesterday’s Morning Paper we have learned that you are now taking applications from exhibitors for the 2000 Canton Fair. We hope you would send us a copy of detailed conditions for application, such as size of each booth, fees for rent, and time schedule for moving in, etc., as well as the time limit for application.
从昨天《晨报》上获悉，贵单位正在征集“20 广交会 ”的参展申请。希望贵方能将展位大孝租用展位价格、进场时间、最迟申请日期等详细情况通知我方。
商务函电下订单范文4
同意修改付款条件
Dear Sir or Madam:
We thank you for your letter dated 6 June and are pleased to acknowledge your order No. 463 of the same date for ceramic tiles.
The modified terms of payment you propose are quite acceptable and a telex has been dispatched to you to this effect.
All the items in your order can be supplied from stock and will be packed and shipped immediately upon the remittance by telegraphic transfer being received.
The following documents will be air mailed to you immediately after shipment is made:
1. Bill of lading in duplicate
2. Invoice, FOB Shanghai in triplicate
3. Guarantee of quality
We will, of course, notify you by telex as soon as your order is shipped.
You can rely on us to give prompt attention to this and any future orders you may place with us.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
就要求以承兑交单付款作答复
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for your request for a trial delivery of ceramic resistors but regret to say that we cannot agree to your proposal.
As an exception, the best we can do for the trial delivery is to offer you direct payment at sight terms.
If you accept our proposal, you run very little risk, since our brand products are well known for the quality, attractive design and reasonable price. Our lines sell very well all over the world and have done so for the last 30 years. We do not think you will have any difficulty in achieving a satisfactory performance with this item.
If you find our proposal acceptable, please let us know and we can then expedite the transaction.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
要求开立信用状
Dear Sir or Madam:
This is in regards to your order for 5,000widgets and our sales confirmation No. 341. We would like to remind you that the delivery date is approaching and we have not yet received the covering letter of credit.
We would be grateful if you would expedite the establishment of the L/C so that we can ship the order on time. In order to avoid any further delay, please make sure that the L/C instructions are in precise accordance with the terms of the contract.
We look forward to receiving your response at an early date.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
修改信用状
Dear Sir or Madam:
Your letter of credit issued by the Royal Bank of Canada has arrived.
Upon further examination, we have found that transshipment and partial shipment are not allowed.
As direct sailings to Portugal are infrequent, we have to transshipment may be necessary. With regard to partial shipment, it would speed matters up if we have in stock instead of waiting for the whole shipment to be completed.
With this in mind, I send you a letter today asking for the letter of credit to be amended to read “part shipment and transshipment allowed”.
I trust this amendment will meet your approval and you will send e-mail to us that effect without delay.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
延长信用状期限
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for your letter of credit covering your order for 10,000 widgets.
We regret to say that, owing to a delay on the part of our suppliers, we will not be able to get the shipment ready before the end of this month. We faxed you earlier today to that effect.
We expect that the consignment will be ready for shipment in the early part of August. We are arranging to ship it on the Great Wall-sailing from Shanghai on 7 August.
We are looking forward to receiving your faxed extension to the letter of credit so that we can effect shipment of the goods.
We send our sincere apologies for the delay and trust that it will not inconvenience you.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
请示提供信用资料
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for you interest in our products. We hope the samples we sent you on 5 February were up to your expectations.
We would like to sort out the credit formalities as soon as possible possible so that we can begin trading. Could you provide us that we can begin trading. Could you provide us with the requisite financial information so that we can open your new account immediately?
Please include a recent financial statement, the name of your bank and references,together with any other relevant credit details. The information you provide will, of course, be held in the strictest confidence.
We look forward to a long and prosperous relationship with your company.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
拒绝赊销
Dear Sir or Madam:
Thank you for your order No. 6565 dated 1 July for 100widgets.
I regret to say that our records show that we do not have sufficient letter of credit. We can fulfill your order only upon the receipt of a confirmed, irrevocable letter of credit.
We are sorry for the delay and await your instructions.
Yours sincerely,
Hillary
商务函电下订单范文5
敬启者；
我们从阿里巴巴得知贵公司的名称。
我们公司是一个专营纺织品的大规模的公司，在世界市场上享有良好的声誉。现在，我方公司将会每月为贵公司能提供新的设计。
我方公司将写信与贵公司建立直接的业务关系。
如果贵公司想要下订单，请告知，如按贵公司的有需要我们将很乐意求提供我们的.设计样本册，为了更好的准备货物如有现货订单，我方在收到你方订单之后三天之内装运。
我们期待你的回复。
敬上，
范文二：
Dear Sirs;
The Bbank of Cchina Shanghai Branch has informed us that your company is a large importer of textiles products. We have the pleasure of introducing ourselves to you ,our company is as a local
the largest textile manufactures in our area. Enclosed please find varies pictures of a variety of our quality textiles picture products.
Besides, we are desirous of the details of your requirement, so as to provide better service.
1 Your specialized in market/
2 Categories of your specialized products
We are looking forward to establishing long-term business relations.
Best regards
范文三：
March 7,
Dear sirs,
We have your name from Messrs. Smith Co.
Our company is a large leading cooperation specializing in textiles items. We have been engaged in this line for 20 years, ()and have business relations with many countries in Southeast Asia.
We are writing you to enter into direct business relations with you. We hope you can send us the latest product catalog and pricelist.
We are looking forward to your inquiry.
Yours Sincerely,
Jone Smith
Manager of Import Department
范文四：
Dear sirs,
Thank for your letter of March 7th, informing us of your interest in our product. We look forward to establishing positive business relationship with your corporation.
We are mainly dealing in the export of Chinese light industrial products. We are convinced that our joint business efforts will be to our mutual benefits.
As requested, a booklet including a general introduction of our latest product catalog together with our samples. Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to let us know.
Yours faithfully,
商务函电下订单范文6
商务信函范文1
商务人士：
您好：
首先，请允许我代表商务向您致以诚挚的感谢!感谢您对我们的栽培!
20xx年xx月，我们怀着无比激动的心情对贵公司进行商务信函征集活动,在此,我代表商务的全体职工向贵公司表示忠心的感谢!向你们表示最诚挚的敬意!
我们公司作为商务行业的重要组成部分，是商务的重要职能。商务在企业发展过程中，既具有决定作用也具有代表作用，因此，作为商务的一名员工，在工作中应该具备良好的职业素养，以便更好地为公司服务。同时，我们也应该注重自身的修养，要在工作中注重自身的道德修养，要严格要求自己，做一个优秀的商务人。
在这里，我代表商务的全体职工向您道个谦，并对您们表示衷心的敬意和衷心的感谢!
商务信函范文1500字篇1
尊敬的领导：
您好!
我是**学院的***，首先，非常感谢您们在百忙之中给予我这次机会。
在公司的这些年，您们一直秉持着“为人民服务”的宗旨，兢兢业业地工作，从不叫苦叫累，我很庆幸自己能在此工作，在这里实现了自己的人生价值。
在过去的xx年，在学校老师的悉心指导和帮助下，在同学们的共同努力下，我取得了一定的成绩，但是与我所追求的目标相比，还是有必须的差距，在今后的工作与学习中，我要更进一步认真学习，发扬团结协作精神，刻苦钻研，勇于探索，不断提高自己的工作水平，虚心向别人学习，认真完成领导和同学交给的任务，努力做好本职工作，在平凡的工作岗位上做出不平凡的业绩，不辜负各位领导的期望和重托。
商务信函范文1500字篇2
尊敬的领导：
您好!首先，真诚的感谢您能在百忙之中抽出时间参加我们的商务信函范文的学习与交流!在此，我谨代表商家公司向您表示深深的谢意!并致以衷心的感谢!
自20xx年xx月以来，我们一直在进行商务信函征集活动的同时，一直没有停止过对我们商务企业的进行。因此在此，我非常感谢您在商务信函的学习，让我们进一步了解了商务企业的基本情况，为我们以后的发展打下良好的基础，同时也为我们今后的发展创造了更加便利的条件。
作为商务信函的学习与交流的过程中，我们通常通常通过学习和分析，了解并了解和了解一些商务行政事务行政事务行政事业行政事务行政事务性文件的性质及其有关文件的内容，以及涉及商务行政事务的相关信息。这也是商务信函的
商务函电下订单范文7
We have obtained your name and address from the commercial office of the Chinese Embassy in Pakistan. We hope to establish friendly business relations with your company. We are a state-owned company specializing in exporting tablecloths.
We can accept orders according to the samples of customers. According to the customer's samples, we can specify the various patterns, specifications and packing of the goods we need, so that you can have a general understanding of the various tablecloths we handle. We are sending you our latest catalogue by airmail under separate cover for your reference.
If you are interested in our products, please let us know immediately. As soon as we receive your specific inquiry, we will send you the price list and samples immediately. We look forward to your early reply.
中文翻译：
我们从中国驻巴基斯坦大使馆商务处得知贵公司的名称和，希望与贵公司建立友好的业务关系，我们是一家国有公司专门经营出口桌布，我们可以根据客户的样品接受订单。根据客户的样品，可以特别说明所需货物的各种图案规格和包装，以便您对我们经营的各种桌布有一个大致的了解现另函航空邮寄我方最新目录供你方参考。如果你方对我方产品感兴趣，请立即通知我方。
我方一收到贵方的具体询价，我方将立即寄给贵方价目表和样品，期待贵方早日答复 。
标签： 新学期
商务函电下订单范文8
概括出函件的主旨、中心，使收信人通过标题就对信文的主要内容有大致的了解。
（一）标题
常见的商务信函标题有以下两种形式：
1、由事由加文种名称“函”构成，如“关于要求承付打印机货款的函”、“推销函”、“订购函”、“索赔函”等。
2、先写“事由”二字，加冒号提示，然后直接标写该信函的内容，如“事由：机动车索赔”。
3、函号
函号即编号，分为对方编号和己方编号。在外贸业务信函的信头上注明编号，可保证信函便于管理和查阅。 函号位置一般出现在标题右下方或信头的左上方。常见的有两种形式：一是仿效行政公文发文字号的格式，采用“x函〔xxxx〕x号”或（xxxx) “函第x号”的形式；二是采用直接编号的形式，如“第x号”。
4、称谓
称谓是对收信人或收信单位的称呼，一般写受文者的尊称，这是商务信函必须的一项。其位置一般在标题或函号的左下方，单独占行，顶格书写，后面用冒号。
书写时有以下两种称谓：
(1)泛指尊称。“尊敬的”后加称谓并加冒号，如“尊敬的先生”、“尊敬的女士”等。尊称中可以使用职务，如“尊敬的办公室主任”、“尊敬的财务部部长”、 “尊敬的销售部经理”等。
(2)具体称谓。即具体指名道姓的尊称。在姓名后面加称谓语。这类称谓一般用于写信人与收信人彼此认识或者非常熟悉的情况。因为这种称谓能够体现写信人与收信人之间的情感与密切关系。称谓可用泛称中的“先生”、“女士”等，也可以使用职务，如“尊敬的办公室石主任”、“尊敬的财务部张部长”、“尊敬的销售部王经理”等。
5、收信人地址、单位 收信人地址、单位要写明收信人企业单位名称及详细地址。
（二）正文
正文是商务信函的主体，叙述商务往来联系的实质问题。正文写作要求内容单纯，一文一事，文字简明，事实有据，行文礼貌。
1、问候语
问候语也即应酬语或客气语。开头的问候语是商务信函必不可少的，即发信人对收信人打招呼的礼貌问候语。一般用一两句尊敬的客气话表示，如“您好”,“近来生意可好，效益颇高”等。如果是初次联系，可使用“久仰大名，未亲雅教”等词语。如果是回函，可使用“惠书敬悉，不胜感激”等词语表示感谢来函。
2、主体
主体是商务信函正文的核心内容，是发信人要说明的事项。不同的商务信函的内容是不同的。一般包括以下两个内容：
（1）说明发函缘由。
直截了当、简明扼要地说明发函的目的、根据、原因等内容；复函则要引叙对方来函要点，以示复函的针对性。
（2）说明发函事项。
主体表达信函的中心内容，一般是根据发函缘由详细地陈述具体事项，或是针对所要商洽的问题或联系事项，阐明自己的意见。要求语气要平和，问题要明确，事实要清楚，表达要明白。如商洽函的正文主体包括商洽缘由、商洽内容、意愿要求三部分；询问函的正文主体包括询问缘由、询问事项两部分；答复函的正文主体包括答复缘由、答复内容两部分；商品报价函的正文主体包括产品的价格、结算方式、发货期、产品规格、可供数量、产品包装、运输方式等。 如果正文主体内容简单，逻辑上可采用篇、段合一式结构，如果正文主体内容较多，逻辑上可采用分段式结构。
3、结尾语
正文结束以后，一般用精练的语言将主体所叙之事加以简单概括，并提出本函的有关要求，强调发函的日的。如请求函的结尾语是“拜托之事，承望协助解决为盼”，希望回函的结尾语是“不吝赐函，静候佳音”等。结尾语视发信人与收信人的关系以及信函的内容而定，要求恰当得体。
（三）信尾
信尾部分包括四部分内容。
1、祝颂语
所有的商务信函都要写明祝颂语。祝颂语分为祝者自身的请候语和收信人的安好语两部分：
(1)请候语，在正文结束后空两格书写。常用的有“敬祝”、“顺颂”、“恭祝” 等。
(2)安好语，一定另起一行顶格书写，以表示对对方的尊重。常用的`安好语有“商棋”、“金安”、“生意兴隆”等。
2、签署
签署即发信人的署名或签名、用印。商务信函的署名可根据企业的要求或发信人的意见而定。有的企业署名以单位名称加盖印章的方式；有的企业要求发信人直接签名，以示对信函的内容负责。个人签名一定要由发信人亲手所签。
3、日期
日期一般是发信具体时间。商务信函因为涉及商务业务往来，务必写明发信日期。
一般采用以下三种形式： (1)公文日期形式。即在信函签署下方用汉字小写写明发信日期，如xxxx年八月十八日。
(2）阿拉伯数字形式。即在信函签署下方用阿拉伯数字写明发信日期，如20XX 年8月18日。
(3)国际标准简写法形式。即在信函签署下方用阿拉伯数字标记年、月、日，在一位数的月、日前加“0^v^，如20XX年08月18日。 无论哪种写法，日期务必写全，以便存档备查。如20XX年08月08日，不能写成“XX年08月08日”。
4、附件 附件是随函附发的有关材料，如报价单、发票、确认书、单据等。如果需要标注附件的，在信函签署的下方可以标注附件。如果附件是两个以上的，要分别标注附件一、附件二等。
范文： 道歉函
xx市兴达贸易有限公司：
贵公司20xx年x月x日函收悉。函中所诉20xx年1月7日《购买电脑桌合同》中，所收的35套黄花牌电脑桌部分出现接口破裂一事，深表歉意，此事已引起我方高度重视，现已就此事进行调查。
经有关邵门查实：我厂生产的xxxx型黄花牌电脑桌，出厂时，经质检部门检验全部为优质产品。函中所提的部分电脑桌出现接口破裂，是由于我方工人在出仓时搬运不懊造成的。衬贵公司的损失，我公司再次深表歉意，并请贵公司尽快提供电脑桌受损的详细数字及破损程度，以及公证人证明和检验证明书，我介司将以最快的速度按实际损失给予无条件赔偿。
对此，我们将引以为戒，查找工作中存在的问题和不足，制仃改正措施杜绝此类事件的发生。 希望能够得到责公司谅解，继续保持良好的贸易往来关系。 候复
xx市光明家具有限公司
20xx年8月9日
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尊敬的XX先生/女士：
你好！
经与贵就xx项目合作事宜进行初步洽谈后，我对合作事宜进行了研究，认为：
1、该项目符合国家的产业政策，具有较好的市场前景和发展空间；
2、该项目不仅将极大的促进双方发展，而且还将极大的促进两地合作，具有较大的经济效益和社会效益；
3、该项目所在我地区有很好的资源优势，具备合作的基本条件。
我认为，本项目符合合作的基本条件，具备进行商务合作洽谈的基础。具体的合作事宜必须经双方更进一步详细洽谈。请贵法人代表收到本邀请函后，派代表赴我作商务考察并就实质性框架合作进行洽谈，我将承担本次商务考察的全部费用。
敬请告知准确时间，以利安排，我法人将亲自与贵面议合作事宜。
写信人：
日期：
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(1)商务公函的概念
商务公函是用来商洽工作、联系业务、询问和答复有关具体实际问题的一种公文。
(2)商务公函的结构及写作方法
公函是平行文。在写作时，一般包括四大部分:标题、行文对象、正文、落款。
①标题一般采用公文规范标题法，即标题由发函机关、事由、受函机关和文种组成。也有的只有事由和文种。
②行文对象是指公函受文者，写在事由之下的第一行左边，顶格，后面加冒号。
③正文是公函的内容即事项，是发函者要告诉对方的具体事情，由三部分组成，即发函因由，发函事项以及结语等，事项部分基本上是叙述和说明的方法，如有要求部分则要根据行文内容来安排，不可过多。结语多使用特此复函。
④落款。包括发函单位的名称和主要负责人的签名以及日期。
公司:
贵方有关保险事宜的6月25日来函知悉，特函告如下:
一、综合险。在没有得到我们顾客的明确指示的情况下，我们一般投保水渍险和战争险。如贵方愿投保综合险，我方可以稍高的保费代保此险。
二、破碎险。破碎险是一种特别保险，需收取额外保费。该险现行保险费率为2%，损失只赔超过5%的部分。
三、保险金额。我方注意到贵方欲为装运给贵方的货物按*金额另加10%投保，我方当照此办理。
我方希望上述答复将满足贵方的要求，并等候贵方的答复。
年月日
相关知识
公函由首部、正文和尾部三部分组成。其各部
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说明价格调整原因
I enclose our new price list , which will come into effect ,from the end of this month. You will see that we have increased our prices on most models. We have ,however , refrained from doing so on some models of which we hold large stocks. We feel we should explain why we have increased our prices. We are paying % more for our raw materials than we were paying last year. Some of our subcontrac tors have raised their by as much as %. As you know , we take great pride in our machines and are jealous of the reputation for quality and dependability which we have achieved over the last years. We will not compromise that reputation because of rising costs. We hope, therefore decided to raise the price of some of our machines. We hope you will understand our position and look forward to your orders.
现谨附上本公司新价格表，新价格将于本月底生效。除了存货充裕的商品外，其余大部分货品均已调升价格。是次调整原因是原材料价格升幅上涨%□，一些承包商的价格调升到%。 过去年，本公司生产的机器品质优良性能可靠。今为确保产品质量，唯有稍为调整价格。上述情况，还望考虑。愿能与贵公司保持紧密合作。
回复感谢信
We greatly appreciate your letter describing the assistance you received in solving your air-conditioning problems. We are now in our fifty year of operation, and we receive many letters like your indicating a high level of customer satisfaction with our installation. We are pleased that our technical staff assisted you so capably. We would like you to know that it you need to contact us at any time in the future. Our engineers will be equally responsive to your request for assistance. If we can be of service to you again, please let us know. Thank you again for your very kind letter.
承蒙来信赞扬本公司提供的空调维修工程服务，欣喜不已。五年前开业至今，屡获客户来函嘉奖，本公司荣幸之至。欣悉贵公司识技术人员的服务，他日苛有任何需要，亦请与本公司联络，本公司定当提供优秀技师，竭诚效劳。在此谨再衷心感谢贵公司的赞赏，并请继续保持联络。
请客户征询其它公司
Thank you for your enquiry of May concerning silk blouses. We regret to say that we do not manufacture clothing to your own designs to the highest European standards: Swan Textiles corporation The industrial zone Shekou We supply the factor with all their silk materials, I enclose a swatch of our stock materials for your examination. Should you desire any of these samples made up into finished products , we can supply the swan factory with them. We hope that this will be of help to you and wish you every success in your business dealings.
谢谢月月日来函查询关于纡绸罩衫的事宜。 本公司只生产纡绸布料，供应纺织品批发商和制造厂家，并没有制造成衣，因而未能接受贵公司订货，谨致万分歉意然而，本公司乐意推荐本地一家生产优质男装的工厂，相信可按贵公司设计的款式制造符合欧洲最高标准的服装：蛇口工业区天鹅纺织品公司。 该厂的丝绸布料全由本公司供应，随函了什样本以供查阅，如贵公司认为适合，本公司乐意负责供应所需布料。愿上资料对贵公司有所帮助。 谨祝生意兴隆，事事顺达。
改善服务
Thank you for your letter of January. I apologize for the delivery problems you had with us last month. I have had a meeting with our production and shipping managers to work out a better system for handling your account .We know we made a mistake on your last order . Although we replaced it for you. we want to make sure it does not happen again. We have devised the enclosed checklist to use for each of your future order. It includes your firm's particular specifications, packing requirements and marking instructions. I believe can service your company better and help you operations run more smoothly with this safeguard. Please contact us if there are any additional points you would like us to include.
感谢月日来信。对上月贵公司更换所需货品，唯恐类似事件再发生，本公司生产运输和出口部经理已商议制订更有效方法处理贵公司事务，并为此特别设计清单。 随信奉上该清单，供贵公司今后订货之用。当中包括特殊规格包装要求和樗说明等栏目，相信此举有助本公司提供更佳服务，促进双方合作。如欲增设任何栏目于该清单上，恳求惠示。
拒绝客户的要求
Thank you for your enquity of are always pleased to hear from a valued regret to say that we cannot agree to your request for technical information regarding our software security fact is,that most of our competitors also keep such information private and sincerely hope that this does not inconvenience you in any there is any other way in which we can help. do not hesitte to contact us again.
月日信收悉，谨此致谢。 来信要求本公司提供有关软件保密系统的技术资料，但鉴于同行向来视该等资料为机密文件，本公司亦不便透露，尚祈见谅。我真诚地希望这样不会对贵公司造成不便。如需本公司协助其他事宜，欢迎随时赐顾垂询。 祝业务蒸蒸日上!
应付难办的客户
We have been doing business together for a long time and we value our relationship of late, we have not been able to provide the kind of service we both want. The problem is that your purchasing department is changing orders after they have been placed. This has led to confusion and frustration for both of our companies. In several instances. you have returned goods that were originally ordered. To solve the problem , I propose that on receipt of an order, our sales staff contact you to verify it. If you decide on any changes, we will amend the order and fax you a copy so that you can check it. I trust this system will cut down on delays and errors, and allow our operations to run smoothly.
承蒙多年惠顾，本公司感激万分。然近来合作出现问题，令服务水准未能符合对方要求，本公司为此提忧不已。 贵公司采部发出定单后，再三更改内容;更有甚者，屡次退回订购之货品，导致了双方公司工作中的混乱和困惑。为避免问题日趋严重，特此在接到定单后，由本公司销售人员与贵公司复核。若需作出改支，本公司把定单修改后电传副本，供贵公司查核。 盼望上述办法经受减少延误，促进双方业务发展。
祝贺新公司成立
It has just come to our attention that you have lately opened your new European headquarters in Brussels. Congratulations on your bold venture. As you know , our companies have had a long business association in the UK. We look forward to collaborating with you in your European venture. Please let us know if we can be of any assistance to you. We will be delighted to help. We wish you the very best of luck and a prosperous future
非正式的预约要求
Could we meet some time this month to discuss the hypermarket proposal? We want to make decision by the beginning of next month. We would very much like to hear your thoughts before we make any definite plans. Could you choose a venue for the meeting? I can fly to London any time, Perhaps you would prefer Lyon or Paris? I leave it to you to choose. I look forward to seeing you again.
您好!未知能否于本月会面，商谈有关特大自助市场的建议呢?我们准备于下月初作出最后决定。在未订下明确计划之前，希望能咨询的意见。敢问能否选定会面地点?在伦敦巴黎或里昂商谈都可以，悉随尊便。 期待与您见面。
物色代理商
Our company manufactures a range of printing presses that are used successfully by companies in over countries. A product specification brochure is enclosed. We are considering expanding our products to new markets and we would appreciate you assistance. In particular , we would like to identify the best agents who are currently serving the printing industryin your region. We are looking for organizations which conduct their business in a truly professional manner. They must be fully conversant with thetechnical side of the printing industry and have a comprehensive understanding of all the features of the lines they represent. We would be very grateful if you could take a few moments to send us the names of three or four organizations that match our shall then contact them to explore the possibility of establishing a mutually acceptable business relationship. Thank you very much for your time and consideration in this matter.
本公司生产的一系列印刷机，获二十多个国家的公司采用。随函附上产品规格说明书，谨供参考。 现为该产品开拓新市场，希望得知贵地区从事印刷工业的代理商资料。如蒙贵公司协助，将不胜感激。如能拨冗寄来数个符合上述要求代理商商号，则感激不尽。本公司将与其联系，研究能否建立互惠互利折业务关系。 右蒙惠告，不胜感荷!
欢迎新代理商
I would like to welcome you to our organization. We are very pleased to have you on our ream. I know that you will be equally proud of our products. Our European sales Representative, Antoine Gerin , will be in touch with you at regular intervals. Please feel to call him any time you have a problem, If I can regular intervals. Please feel free to call him any time you have a problem. If I can ever be of service, please call me. I am planning a trip to France next month, and I am looking forward to meeting you. In the meantime, the best of luck with our product line.
欢迎加入本公司成为我们的一分子。相信您也会以本公司的产品为荣。欧洲销售代理安东尼・格林会定期与联络，遇有问题可与他商讨。若有其他需要，欢迎向我提出。 下月我将赴法国一游，期望能与您会面。谨祝产品销量节节上升。
要求约见
Would you be interested in stocking a radical new departure in laptop computers? I would very much like to brief you on this great innovation. Could we make an appointment? The machine is the same size as most laptops but comes with some totally new features. The retail price will undercut its nearest competitor by at least %.I shall be in the UK from September to October. If you would like to know more, just fax or telex me.
贵公司有没有考虑配置最新型号的手提电脑?本公司诚意推介该崭新产品，盼能预约时间作一介绍。 该电脑体积和同类电脑相仿，但配备多项先进功能。其零售价较同类产品便宜%以上。本人将于月日至月日逗留英国。如蒙拨冗了解该产品资料，烦请函复。
拒绝约见
Thank you for your letter of July regarding your new laptop computer. I regret to say that we cannot agree to your request for an appointment. We currently have the sole agency for another computer company, Under the terms of the contract , We are barred from stocking any other company's products. The sole agency comes under review in six months' time . Contact us then and we may be able to consider your new product.
月日有关新型号手提电脑函收悉。 本公司暂未能安排会面，深感歉意。现时正为另一家电脑公司提任独家代理，根据合约条款，不得销售别家电脑公司的产品。该代理权将于六个月后期满。届时烦请再作联系，共商贵产品代理事宜。
同意约见
Thank you for your letter of September. I note that you will bein the UK during the whole of November. We are quite interested by the fashion knitwear illustrated in yourcatalogue. As a fashion Chain. We might consider having some of our own designs manufactured in China. Please let me know when you would like to call on us. The week beginning November would suit me best. I look forward to meeting you and discussing this matter.
感谢月日的来信。欣闻阁下将于月逗留伦敦一个月，望到时能拨冗相会。本公司对贵公司商品目录中的针织时装深感兴趣。现正研究设计款式，在中国制造后寄本公司时装连锁店发售。 如能于月日或其后数天抽空来访，当感激不尽。 期待与您会面，商讨有关事宜。
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货物运输函电范例
CHINA TRANSWORLD SHIPPING CORPORATION
3333 Binhai Street,Liaoning,China
Tel: (0411)5000000 Fax:(0411)5000001
Zip code:116001
September 13,
Goodman
Senior Shipping Clerk
Northgranary Cereals,Inc.
616 Taiyangdao Street
Harbin 116001
Dear :
Thank you for your fax of September 11. We are pleased to inform you that we have been able to secure the vessel you asked for.
She is the SS Bohai and is docked at present in has a cargo capacity of eight thousand tons,is a bulk carrier,and has a speed of 24 knots which will certainly be able to make the number of trips you mentioned.
Please fax us to confirm the charter and we will send you the charter party.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Hanchen
Charter Department
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Dear sir,
Did you receive our quotation on Apr 12th?and no reply from was waiting until all the colleagues left the office. May be you are very busy.
So pls can you take some time to give me a reply?and kindly give me some advice on XX(products)
Look forward your reply
Thanks and regards.
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商务写作
(Business Writing)
一、商务信函概述
? 一、正确的观念
? 1.商务信函是一种“推销”函
? 商务信函是一种常用的商业联系媒介，实际上商务信函是一种“推销”函，写信人总是在推销着什么，或是物品、或是服务等。 要写好商务信函不仅要具备相关的业务知识，掌握好法规和条款等，还应具备扎实的语言基础，熟悉信函的书写形式和行文要求。 2.商务信函的基本特点 商务信函书写的重点应放在“效率”上，应易读易懂；语气真诚、友好、客气；语言简短、朴实、自然；内容清晰、准确、具体；行文正确、完整。 3.商务信函无定律 好的信函并没有固定不变的写作模式，因人而异。写信时，应充分考虑收信方的观
点和看法、背景和所处环境。
二、应用原则
? 1.“挨达”AIDA原则：在拟就一封商务信函时，应首先考虑的原则： A— Attention 注意 I— Interest 兴趣 D— Desire 意愿 A— Action行动 个“C”的行文原则 明晰Clearness 具体Concreteness 简洁Conciseness 诚意Conscientiousness 正确Correctness 个性Character 礼貌Courtesy 完整Completeness 体谅Considerateness 优美Concinnity
三、商务信函的构成要素
? 1.信头（Letterhead）
? 是指发信人所在公司的名称和地址，通常是预先印制好的，一般位于信纸的正上方。 ?
? 内容包括：电话号码、电报挂号（Cable Address）、传真（Fax）和电传（Telex）号码、信件编号或索引号码以及写信日期。 例如： 英国—— date/month/year 27 February,20_ 美国—— month/date/year February 27,20_ 2.信内地址（Inside Address） 即收信人的姓名和地址，通常是在日期下面隔两行，位于书信正文的左上方。 3.称呼（Salutation） 是发信人对收信人的称号用语，自成一行，位于“信内地址”左下方的一、二行处。 商务书信的称呼通常要注意下面几点： （1）Dear Sirs 和 Gentlemen是最常使用的公文用语，前者是英国式的称呼，后者
是美国式的称呼；注意Sirs前通常加Dear；Gentlemen必须用复数；
? （3）Dear Sir是指男性，Dear Madam是指女性，Dear Sir or Madam是指不知道对方性别。 （4）称呼后面用冒号或逗号均可，一般用冒号。 4.正文 正式的商务信件在每一段之间均留一空行。每一行末尾的单词一般不移行。 5.结尾客套语 位于正文最后一行下面一、二行处，从信纸中间偏右的地方开始写，一般占一行，第一个字母要大写，结尾用逗号。 6.签名 是指发信人、书信执笔人或公司代表在书信上签上公司名称或个人名字，通常位于
结尾客套语下面两行，从中间偏右处开始写，一般占3～4行：第一行写公司名称，第二行是个人签名，要用钢笔；第三行打印自己的名字，用于辨认和复信；第四行打印所属部门的名称及签名人的职称。
? 信封和书信的写法-The Style of Envelope and Letter 1.信封的写法 （1）美国式航空信封的写法（Stamp） ABC Manufacturing Company(收信人地址) 150 Giera Court Parlin, Livingstone New Jersey 08859, USAMr. Black Smith(收信人名字和职称)President of the Company Beijing Import and Export Company 86 Baiyilu,Haidian District 100872 Beijing,PRC (发信人地址) （2）英国式航空信封的写法（Stamp） Beijing Import and Export Company(收信人地址) 86 Baiyilu,Haidian District 100872 Beijing,PRC AFTER 15 DAYS PLEASE RETURN TO(发信人地址) SMITH & SON, LTD 15 WOOD STREET LONDON 6 ENGLAND 商务写作的十大技巧 1.了解读者 2.使用第二人称，强调读者的利益 3.确定单一的交流目标和目的 4.清晰、简洁、直白 5.使用主题行、缩格、简短的开头段落和附言 6.开篇和结尾有力 7.在长文件中应用标题、空白、图表
? 9.避免消极写作 10.应用说服的技巧来影响读者 商务写作目标 商务写作通常是为了完成以下任务： 通知 说服 指导 记录 商务信函举例1： 亲爱的思拜格女士： 我公司致力于为您提供高效的服务。我们拥有大量的专家和技术人员、充足
的资源，能够为您设计一流的健身中心。这将有助于贵公司提高劳动生产率，降低缺勤率，而且我们收费很低。
? 请您仔细考虑，选择我公司将会有如下收益：劳动生产率提高，员工士气高涨，缺勤现象减少，还有选择一流的供应商所带来的种种好处。 当您正考虑如何才能找到一家最好的公司，它将为您的公司提供上述益处时，我相信您一定会马上与我们联系，尽快开始改善贵公司的工作环境，提高公司业绩。 商务信函举例2： 收信人：Great Valley 人事部 发信人：质量提高小组 主题：停车场照明问题 日期：20_/6/20 今年夏天要在停车场的边缘增设照明灯，计划在停车场内端增设五盏，左右两边各增设三盏，共计11盏。 这些照明灯将创造一个更安全的环境，如有问题，请与质量小组的成员联系。祝愉快！ 商务信函举例3： 亲爱的阿兰： 作为会议中心的主席，我现在写信通知你有关我方机 构的重大变化，相信会对彼此业务关系产生影响。 普林斯顿会议中心拥有291间客房，在过去的两年里， 我们的定房率、营业收入和利润都在不断提高。根据业 内年度统计资料，我们每间客房的盈利率已经进入全美 城郊旅店的前十位。我们的业绩和有效管理使公司在几 年内获得了数项大奖，包括：Pinnacle奖，AAA四星 奖。 我们希望增强与您的业务联系。我们感谢过去几年里 您的惠顾，并致力在未来为您提供超乎您想象的服务。 我们将保持优良的传统，更好与贵协会合作。 我们将很快与您电话联系，与您磋商最近的会议筹备 工作。如果您有紧急需要，请打电话通知我们。很荣幸 与您继续业务往来。 商务信函格式
? 1.缩行式（Indented Style） 缩行式将封内地址、其他需要分行的地方的后行比前行往右缩进二至三个英文字母，各行以右斜方式排列。 各段的起始字缩入四至五个英文字母。 结尾客套语和签名置于中间偏右下方。
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
Mrs. R. G. Cole
Manager
Mabels Pty Ltd
Canterbury 8633
Dear Madam,
We must remind you …
Yours faithfully
J. Turner
Production Manager
? 2.半平头式（Semi-block Style）
? 日期、客套语和签名一般从信纸中部写起
? 正文的每个段落的第一行往后缩入二至五个字母
? 封内地址、称呼与左边看齐
ABC Bottles Pty Ltd.
? Kirra Road, Ashtown 1128
? Mrs. R. G. Cole
? Manager
? Mabels Pty Ltd Canterbury 8633 Dear
