20_雅思写作真题范文 第一篇
It is claimed that people embarking on a career early and striving for it tend to gain higher work satisfaction than job hoppers who change their jobs frequently. Generally, I hold the same viewpoint.
It is true that most people enter the workforce with limited ideas about whether they want to stay in a particular industry for their entire career. So it makes sense to allow themselves some chances to explore when it comes to career prospects. In addition, the digital age has changed the way an individual perceives career development. Nowadays, people are no longer confined to traditional vocational choices, such as engineers and lawyers; instead, there are more unconventional work options, for example, being an influencer on social media. Therefore, the expanding employment scenario delays the decision making of many young minds. Nevertheless, frequent changes are detrimental to adults’ career development prospects. Employers today still highly value loyalty in many industries, and they usually offer additional incentives to long-term employees, including bonuses and reward schemes. Long-time employees have the advantage of thoroughly understanding the operation at work and also becoming familiar with the staff and processes. If they work hard, their promotion prospects are good, and there is likely to be greater job security, with the promise of a good pension when they retire. In this case, young people should plan for their career early so as to explore their interests to the fullest and research for possible jobs or businesses in the specific field, then stick to the profession they enjoy, and grow together with the company. To conclude, modern society has enough examples to prove that it is never too early to plan one’s occupation, and one should commit to the career path that is carefully chosen in order to achieve the greatest job satisfaction.
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20_雅思写作真题范文 第二篇
说明文其实并不是一个难题，在本周四的预测直播上专门分析过，一般来讲说明文的形成原因我们会从社会，经济，科技，环境等外部因素来写，而它的解决方法往往无外乎是政府立法，政府投资以及政府教育引导。
从这个角度我们不能看出一个说明文，它的形成原因和解决方法一般都不太会是个人的自我意愿或者自己的想法。
那我们看到今天这个题目，他问人们即使知道不健康的食物是不健康的，但为什么他们还会喜欢吃？
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20_雅思写作真题范文 第三篇
Humanity’s voracious consumption of natural resources has brought about many problems. This essay will analyze some major consequences of over-depletion of oil, forests, and fresh water resources and offer possible solutions to reverse the trend.
Fossil fuels such as oil produce large quantities of carbon dioxide when burnt, and the heat trapped by carbon emissions in the atmosphere leads to climate change. The environment is naturally able to deal with certain amounts of emissions, but the consumption of oil by human activities is in dramatic rise, driving global warming to dangerous levels. Therefore, action should be taken to encourage the widespread use of renewable forms of energy, such as solar radiation, hydro power, and wind energy. A good example is the manufacture and increasing availability of electric cars, which is an effective strategy to reduce greenhouse gas emissions and improve air quality.
Deforestation or forest clearance results in a large number of disastrous effects, and one of them is the decline of biodiversity. From mammals to birds, insects, amphibians or plants, the forest is home to many rare and fragile species. By destroying the forests, human activities are putting entire ecosystems in danger, creating natural imbalance, and putting Life at threat. In order to maintain biodiversity, governments should promote greater understanding of plants and animals by investing in the research and preservation effort of universities, zoos, and botanical institutes. An alternative strategy is to protect natural habitats by expanding nature reserves, which will have immediate positive consequences for those areas by preserving delicate ecosystems.
Insufficient fresh water resources have become a main crisis in many countries, both wealthy and poor. However, the profligate use of water exacerbates the situation. The biggest problem originating from water shortage is that people can hardly survive since up to 60% of the human body consists of water, and sanitation issues are followed when there is no proper access to clean water for daily use. Other adverse consequences of water scarcity include food shortage as agriculture relies on irrigation and economic slowdown because sufficient water access is a priority for industrial development. To address this issue, the government should provide leadership and work collectively across departments of legislation, regulation, and taxation levers to conduct water reuse, management, and conservation and to promote water treatment technologies such as desalination.
To conclude, natural sources of energy are scarce worldwide nowadays; thus, effective measures should be taken immediately to make a difference.
20_雅思写作真题范文 第四篇
(让步)It must be conceded(承认)that in many ways technology aids in crime prevention and forensics(法医学;辩论术). Security systems such as surveillance cameras and financial tracking databases discourage would-be criminals from breaking the law, as they are aware of the ease with which they may be tracked, caught, and prosecuted(起诉). Also, new breakthroughs in DNA testing and computer simulations have made it easier to reconstruct crime scenes and identify criminals. (转折)However, the issue with this argument is that not all criminals are dissuaded(劝阻) by the knowledge of these systems, and while they do increase the likelihood of catching people who have committed crimes, these technological improvements do not necessarily prevent the crimes themselves from occurring.
20_雅思写作真题范文 第五篇
Admittedly, government should, at least partially, be in charge of sending youngsters to school. This is mainly because young children are vulnerable members of society, and they may be confronted with unexpected accidents. In this case, it is imperative for government to assume its unescapable obligation by transporting young students to school. Besides, if government has a sufficient budget, it should provide such welfare services to its taxpayers, as those parents are very likely to be wrapped up in their work, with no more time allocated to giving their children a ride to school. // However, offering totally free transport may seriously strain public finances, forcing the government to make serious cuts to its expenditure in other crucial domains such as healthcare, public infrastructure, poverty elimination, and environment protection.
解析
赞同是政府责任的理由：1. 有义务保护未成年人;2. 有预算的情况下，为其纳税人(家长)提供便利 [这边“有预算”的前提，为下文做铺垫]// 反对理由：校车不是政府必须开销，预算吃紧的情况下应优先考虑其他领域需求，比如：医疗、基础教育、基础设施、脱贫、环境保护等
vulnerable adj. 易受到伤害的
be confronted with 遭遇到
assume vt. 承担
taxpayer n. 纳税人
be wrapped up in把全部精力放在某事上〔以至于没有时间关心别的事〕
strain vt. 使不堪承受
make cuts to sth. 〔规模或数量，尤指政府或公司支出的〕削减，缩减，裁减
elimination n. 消除，根除
Body 2
Acting as the legal guardians of young children, parents undoubtedly ought to take the responsibility to ensure the safety of their kids. In addition, if there is a short distance between the home and the school, it is even more inconvenient for students to take the school bus, as their residences are not always on a school bus route. Driving children to school by parents can instead save much time. // However, it is not always the case, since there are either instances where parents fail to coordinate the time of transporting their children and going to work on time due to the long travelling distance, or instances where impoverished families cannot afford private cars to drive their children to school.
解析
赞同家长接送的理由：1. 作为孩子监护人，理应为孩子安全负责;2. 距离近的情况下，校车的固定线路反而不便利 [这里“距离近”的前提为下文做铺垫] // 反对家长接送理由：特殊情况下，比如家校距离远、低收入家庭没有条件等，家长无法协调时间或金钱接送孩子
guardian n. 监护人
residence n.[C] 住宅
on a …. route 在…的线路上
impoverished adj. 穷困的
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In conclusion, government and parents should be jointly responsible for transferring children to school. If there is a short distance, then it is advised for parents to take such responsibility. If the travelling distance is rather long, then parents ought to send their children to the nearest school bus station punctually, and it is legitimate for government to charge parents a reasonable fee. Meanwhile, low-income families should be taken into consideration, and government has to guarantee children from these families free access to school buses.
解析
情况摆明自己立场：距离近，家长接送;距离远，家长准时将孩子送到附近校车站(这也是目前现实中常见的解决办法)
jointly adv. 共同地;联合地
punctually adv. 准时地
legitimate adj. 合情合理的
20_雅思写作真题范文 第六篇
Introduction
A conundrum of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, such as corpulence, which can be partly ascribed to people’s preference for unhealthy foods despite the fact that they know the detriments. Personally, behind such preference are two predominant factors, and this thorny issue can hopefully be tackled.
说明文题型，问原因和解决办法。该话题与12月2日刚考过的话题相似：Shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drink that has been scientifically proved to be bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 这题干不就是一种解决办法嘛?另外，剑16 Test 3 以及 6月17日考题，都是与健康饮食相关的题。
Ø conundrum n. 难题
Ø corpulence n. 肥胖，臃肿
Ø be ascribed to 被归因于
Ø detriment n. 坏处
Reasons
To commence, the sound flavour that junk food offers should be responsible for the unhealthy diet. This is mainly because those unhealthy foods are usually sugar-, salt-, or fat-laden ones high in calorie and GI, which, after being eaten, will stimulate nerve cells to produces dopamine, a chemical functioning as a neurotransmitter to convey bliss and excitement. For this reason, people prefer or even easily get addicted to sugary beverages and fatty foods, especially the ones whose mouthfeel has been enhanced./ Besides, it is due to the surging living pressure that most employees nowadays have to work non-stop. In this case, they tend to order these instant foods, usually unhealthy ones, which fit the current fast-paced life.
原因1：好吃;原因2：压力大 → 快节奏的生活→ 一些不健康的食品，比如快餐，比较适合这种趋势
Ø laden adj. 满载的，装满的(lade的过去分词)
Ø dopamine n. 多巴胺
Ø function as v. 起…作用
Ø neurotransmitter n. 神经递质
Ø mouthfeel n. 口感
Solutions
Considering the gravity of this trend, two schemes can be put on the agenda. The first approach is that policies regarding subsidisation can be issued by governments to motivate manufacturers to develop diet and delicious products. Meanwhile, the subsidies can also to some extent reduce the production costs, which will guarantee the newly-developed products sold with a proper price. Besides, high tax could be imposed on unhealthy food products. In this way, producers will thus have to raise the price for the sake of ensuring their profits, which naturally follows that ordinary people are more likely to consume the aforementioned cheaper but healthy alternatives.
整体方案就是调控价格：1. 用补贴鼓励公司研发健康美味的产品，同时降低新研发产品的售卖价格;2. 提高不健康食品的税收 → 售卖价格提高 → 人们选择买前面更便宜且健康的食品
Ø diet adj. 低脂肪的，低糖的
Ø impose vt. 征收
Conclusion
To recapitulate, since possible culprits and feasible remedies have been enumerated, this crisis can be promisingly resolved with joint efforts of relevant parties.
重申观点
Ø recapitulate v. 总结
Ø culprit n. 罪犯;(不好事情的)原因
Ø remedy n. 治疗方案;解决办法
Ø promisingly adv. 有希望地
Ø joint efforts 通力合作
